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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida 
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Open your arms to my heart Let me feel the comfort there A caress unto our soul as we Live this day without a care Only once let me see the spark Of Love within darkest night Of Light within midnight orbs Seasoned bliss – second sight Clouds and pain, touch us not Amidst a day so truly made For hearts entwined in as much For love defined in a single touch Hold my hand inside your own Feel it’s fit that matches mine Fingers laced – made to fit Each molded crease, each time kissed line A tender brush of velvet lips A whispered sigh – a simple touch Embraced in hope, in faith, and strength As time itself stands still for us Open your arms to my heart Let me feel the comfort there A caress unto our soul as we Live our life without a care May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Isn't it amazing how carefree you can feel when you share such a feeling of caring with another. Beautiful words, dear friend. I am dancing with you on these. Michael |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Well done, and a very sweet poem. Teresa King |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
What can I say, Satiate...wonderful and beautiful...you keep outdoing yourself each time...for this, and for many other reasons, I am very, very proud of you.  Alicat |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Satiate beautiful poem, especially loved these lines..... A tender brush of velvet lips A whispered sigh – a simple touch Embraced in hope, in faith, and strength As time itself stands still for us Excellent!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Michael, indeed...thank you much, dear. netswan, thank you! Ali, thank you m'friend...that means a lot to me. Dark Angel, thank you muchly |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Satiate! Denise |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Satiate, haven't seen you post in here for awhile. I really enjoy your poetry and must say "Carefree" was worth waiting for. "For love defined in a single touch" That's a nice line, and i believe it is possible. Nice writing! A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Ah yes... the essential dream... carefree!! Very nice little one!  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is so lovely, Satiate |
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Cassanova Junior Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 39Turlock, Ca. |
Oh, I think I'm in love!!! Just teasing, but your poem whispered softly and bespeaks a tender heart that surely deserves to be held! Wow! Jason |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Live life without a care"... makes me want to come back with a refrain... Nice job, Satiate..  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Satiate!! This is a wonderful poem. . .and I love the first line. . . Glad to see that you found some "inspiration"! Beautiful!! ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Denise, thank you Danny, you say the nicest things! I believe it's possible too. LR, aw shucks .. thanks! Thank you, Martie Jason, why thank you, sir! And, welcome to Passions!Nan, coming from you that is a high compliment, indeed...thank you. SVEN!! Oh goodness! LOL Thank YOU very much for the kickstart, my newfound friend! I had a little help with the first line, yanno... |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Open your arms to my heart Let me feel the comfort there A caress unto our soul as we Live this day without a care Very lovely...Beautiful...I love it Jeffrey |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Satiate~ This was an amazing poem, just beautiful. Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Satiate~ A lovely read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
You didn't tell me that you had a brand new piece up for me to read.. You know how often I don't get to come here. I love it. Keep writing like this. Now this is heart felt if I have ever read a piece. Wow, now this made my heart tingle. Thank you! Love, Lady |
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