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Carefree

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Nicole
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0 posted 04-14-2000 04:10 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nicole

Open your arms to my heart
Let me feel the comfort there
A caress unto our soul as we
Live this day without a care

Only once let me see the spark
Of Love within darkest night
Of Light within midnight orbs
Seasoned bliss – second sight

Clouds and pain, touch us not
Amidst a day so truly made
For hearts entwined in as much
For love defined in a single touch

Hold my hand inside your own
Feel it’s fit that matches mine
Fingers laced – made to fit
Each molded crease, each time kissed line

A tender brush of velvet lips
A whispered sigh – a simple touch
Embraced in hope, in faith, and strength
As time itself stands still for us

Open your arms to my heart
Let me feel the comfort there
A caress unto our soul as we
Live our life without a care



 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown
© Copyright 2000 Nicole Adams - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 04-14-2000 04:21 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Isn't it amazing how carefree you can feel when you share such a feeling of caring with another.  Beautiful words, dear friend.  I am dancing with you on these.

Michael
netswan
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2 posted 04-14-2000 04:21 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Well done, and a very sweet poem.

Teresa King
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3 posted 04-14-2000 04:24 AM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

What can I say, Satiate...wonderful and beautiful...you keep outdoing yourself each time...for this, and for many other reasons, I am very, very proud of you.  


Alicat
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4 posted 04-14-2000 07:20 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Satiate beautiful poem, especially loved these lines.....

A tender brush of velvet lips
A whispered sigh – a simple touch
Embraced in hope, in faith, and strength
As time itself stands still for us

Excellent!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Nicole
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5 posted 04-14-2000 01:25 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Michael, indeed...thank you much, dear.  

netswan, thank you!

Ali, thank you m'friend...that means a lot to me.

Dark Angel, thank you muchly  
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6 posted 04-14-2000 01:27 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful, Satiate!

Denise
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7 posted 04-14-2000 03:26 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Satiate, haven't seen you post in here for awhile.  I really enjoy your poetry and must say "Carefree" was worth waiting for.
"For love defined in a single touch"
That's a nice line, and i believe it is possible.
Nice writing!

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

Local Rebel
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8 posted 04-14-2000 06:36 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Ah yes... the essential dream... carefree!!  Very nice little one!  
Martie
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9 posted 04-14-2000 07:00 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This is so lovely, Satiate
Cassanova
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10 posted 04-14-2000 09:01 PM       View Profile for Cassanova   Email Cassanova   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cassanova

Oh, I think I'm in love!!!

Just teasing, but your poem whispered softly and bespeaks a tender heart that surely deserves to be held! Wow!


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11 posted 04-14-2000 10:20 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

"Live life without a care"... makes me want to come back with a refrain... Nice job, Satiate..
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12 posted 04-14-2000 10:26 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Excellent Satiate!!  This is a wonderful poem. . .and I love the first line. . .

Glad to see that you found some "inspiration"!  

Beautiful!!

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--Victor Frankl

Nicole
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13 posted 04-15-2000 12:33 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Denise, thank you

Danny, you say the nicest things! I believe it's possible too.

LR, aw shucks .. thanks!  

Thank you, Martie

Jason, why thank you, sir!    And, welcome to Passions!

Nan, coming from  you that is a high compliment, indeed...thank you.  

SVEN!!  Oh goodness!  LOL  Thank YOU very much for the kickstart, my newfound friend!  I had a little help with the first line, yanno...  
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14 posted 04-15-2000 12:49 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Open your arms to my heart
Let me feel the comfort there
A caress unto our soul as we
Live this day without a care

Very lovely...Beautiful...I love it

Jeffrey
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15 posted 04-15-2000 06:50 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Satiate~
This was an amazing poem, just beautiful.
Tracie~


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Anne Rooks

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16 posted 04-15-2000 07:02 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Satiate~
A lovely read.
~*Marge*~


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17 posted 04-15-2000 07:43 AM       View Profile for Ladycat   Email Ladycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ladycat's Home Page   View IP for Ladycat

You didn't tell me that you had a brand new piece up for me to read..  You know how often I don't get to come here.  I love it.  Keep writing like this.  Now this is heart felt if I have ever read a piece. Wow, now this made my heart tingle. Thank you!

Love,
Lady
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