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From My Lips, Into Your Ear

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 04-14-2000 02:41 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

Heart in pause
as I pen word
from soul
to heart
to ears
unheard.

Wildly now, how my heart beats.
(Native drum cannot compete...)
Weary, I live life absurd,
awaiting mercy of your word.

My soul, she moans, to be complete.
If only life would be so sweet.
If love were but a wish away,
you would have been here yesterday.

I'll petition God to have you near.
I'll whisper, "please" into your ear...
If longing is but madness, kind,
know that you're already mine.

And even should it end like this--
you've already made me Bliss.
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1 posted 04-14-2000 02:47 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Aahhh! The sweet sound of a perfect poem.
serenity, this is perfection...poetry at it's best

Jeffrey
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2 posted 04-14-2000 02:52 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Gorgeous and so wistful.


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3 posted 04-14-2000 04:30 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

*sigh*

What a wonderful whisper this is.  Beautiful work, serenity.


Michael
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4 posted 04-14-2000 05:43 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Sweet JC--ahem--Sweet JEFFREY--how I blush!
                Thank you so...m'darlin'...

netswan--wistful it is!  (And for the
         'gorgeous', I thank you much!)

Michael---a 'sigh' from you is legion of
          love, and more of that lovely love
          back to you!
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5 posted 04-14-2000 07:36 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

To sigh is to feel from the deepest depths of the heart, speechless poem, wounderful .


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .
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6 posted 04-14-2000 08:09 AM       View Profile for Richter_9   Email Richter_9   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richter_9

Ah, this poem is bliss, serenity.  Deeply moving.

Rich
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7 posted 04-14-2000 09:31 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wonderfully written  
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8 posted 04-14-2000 10:51 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful, Serenity! Very nice!

Denise
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9 posted 04-14-2000 11:01 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

So filled with longing ... yes, this is gorgeous, Serenity .... (sigh)

 "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind."
Maxwell Maltz
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10 posted 04-14-2000 11:07 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

My soul, she moans, to be complete.
If only life would be so sweet.
If love were but a wish away,
you would have been here yesterday.

I'll petition God to have you near.
I'll whisper, "please" into your ear...
If longing is but madness, kind,
know that you're already mine.

And even should it end like this--
you've already made me Bliss.

-------------------------


when sweet serenity finds bliss...
she gives to us ... a sweet poetic kiss  

this is so perfect...and so full of your grace...like i just said perfect.
love ya sweets,
jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon


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11 posted 04-15-2000 05:05 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

angelswing, my dear 'hoot', pepper, and the dynamic denise---

such lovely praise from you all.  Much grats.

JM--a nudge, a nod, a wink, a HUG...luv t'ya.

Rich--so glad to return the favor!
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12 posted 04-15-2000 07:06 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Serenity~

Mighty sweet little muse you've got
whispering in your ear.

'If love were but a wish away,
you would have been here yesterday.'

Awesome thought.
~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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13 posted 04-15-2000 07:19 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

MARGE--WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?  Hmmm...on second thought...I'll wait for the poem...(Lovely little muse YOU'VE got these days as well...giggles with hugs...)
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14 posted 04-15-2000 06:03 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

serenity, your poetry seems to be laden with delicate heartfelt desires, and I feel a strong undertone of passions whispering.

Parker
 
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