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From My Lips, Into Your Ear
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From My Lips, Into Your Ear |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Heart in pause as I pen word from soul to heart to ears unheard. Wildly now, how my heart beats. (Native drum cannot compete...) Weary, I live life absurd, awaiting mercy of your word. My soul, she moans, to be complete. If only life would be so sweet. If love were but a wish away, you would have been here yesterday. I'll petition God to have you near. I'll whisper, "please" into your ear... If longing is but madness, kind, know that you're already mine. And even should it end like this-- you've already made me Bliss. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Aahhh! The sweet sound of a perfect poem. serenity, this is perfection...poetry at it's best Jeffrey |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Gorgeous and so wistful. Teresa King www.tipsfortop.com |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
*sigh* What a wonderful whisper this is. Beautiful work, serenity. Michael |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sweet JC--ahem--Sweet JEFFREY--how I blush! Thank you so...m'darlin'... netswan--wistful it is! (And for the 'gorgeous', I thank you much!) Michael---a 'sigh' from you is legion of love, and more of that lovely love back to you! |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
To sigh is to feel from the deepest depths of the heart, speechless poem, wounderful . With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one . |
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Richter_9 Junior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 41Whereever I happen to be at the time |
Ah, this poem is bliss, serenity. Deeply moving. Rich |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderfully written  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Serenity! Very nice! Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
So filled with longing ... yes, this is gorgeous, Serenity .... (sigh) "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind." Maxwell Maltz |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My soul, she moans, to be complete. If only life would be so sweet. If love were but a wish away, you would have been here yesterday. I'll petition God to have you near. I'll whisper, "please" into your ear... If longing is but madness, kind, know that you're already mine. And even should it end like this-- you've already made me Bliss. ------------------------- when sweet serenity finds bliss... she gives to us ... a sweet poetic kiss  this is so perfect...and so full of your grace...like i just said perfect. love ya sweets, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
angelswing, my dear 'hoot', pepper, and the dynamic denise--- such lovely praise from you all. Much grats. JM--a nudge, a nod, a wink, a HUG...luv t'ya. Rich--so glad to return the favor! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Mighty sweet little muse you've got whispering in your ear. 'If love were but a wish away, you would have been here yesterday.' Awesome thought. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
MARGE--WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN? Hmmm...on second thought...I'll wait for the poem...(Lovely little muse YOU'VE got these days as well...giggles with hugs...) |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
serenity, your poetry seems to be laden with delicate heartfelt desires, and I feel a strong undertone of passions whispering. Parker |
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