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devina
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I gently lose my own strength-
Tolerance does not become me…

Indecisive negligence, in who I am-
Brings me to my knees,
A
    Fallen
              Woman…

Time stands, I let everyone fall-
Resistance to say no, begging withdraw…

Can I not cooperate-
Must I always hesitate?

My life-
Forever a debate…



 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

© Copyright 2000 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 04-14-2000 12:49 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

I can relate to this
Well written

Jeffrey
Janet Marie
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2 posted 04-14-2000 12:49 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

emotional poem D,
i relate to these feelings...insecurities and doubts--they  test out hearts dont they... but your not fallen...just human...(smile)
take care, jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon


Alwye
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3 posted 04-14-2000 12:51 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

I too can very much so relate..such emotions do indeed tear at one's heart.  Exellent work.

 *Krista Knutson*

As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
~*Albert Schweitzer*~
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4 posted 04-14-2000 02:27 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Thank you, thank you for this m'sis!
and how i so understand...love to you? nay, love YOU!  SO HONEST.  lovely.
Danny Holloway
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5 posted 04-14-2000 11:53 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Throw caution to the wind.....leap and shout to high heaven.  It feels great!!!

devina, thanks for responding to my poems. much appreciated.

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

Parker
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devina, ah the questions of what one should do..... well just close your eyes and fall, he will catch you......

**Note** don't do this alone unless you are near a hospital.

Parker
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7 posted 04-14-2000 01:03 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I think most people can relate to this. Some decisions are harder than others. Great poem!

Denise
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8 posted 04-14-2000 01:23 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

ahhhh....my mistress devina, clarity comes from comedy and comedy from error.  When in doubt, plunge forward.  It works for me.
Rob
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9 posted 04-14-2000 01:38 PM       View Profile for Effigy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Effigy

well done.
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Devina,
       all I can say is, follow your heart. . and you'll make the right decision. . . and if you fall, your friends will be there to catch you. . .

Wonderful poem my friend. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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11 posted 04-14-2000 10:56 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Devina~
With a heart as open and honest
as yours ... you will reap the
harvest of gaining much though
the fall.

Take a deep breath ... and plunge !
You have a safety net ... it's your faith.  It will not let you down.
Love you
~*Marge*~



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12 posted 04-14-2000 11:00 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Sometimes we spend so much time with the "wrong One" when someone new comes along we are always afraid of the unknown.  But we can't allow are fear to rule our world.  Let yourself go....

Marina
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Jeffrey- thank you dear, glad to see you reading here!!

Janet- As human as they come!! thank you!!

Alwye- I know you understand, guess we all go through it huh?

serenity- Lots a love back atcha sis...I know you'll always be around...MUCH LOVE!!!

Danny- I'll have to try that!! Seems you're knowin more than me lately!!

James- Nice to see you again dear! Who will catch me...me thinks I'd fall on my head about now!!! Thanks for the thought though!!

Denise- desisions SUCK m'friend..lol

Rob- I shall try your theory out...I'll letcha know!!

Effigy-thank you...

Sven- Friends like you, dear Sven- warm this heart a thousand times over...I know you'll always be there...and I'll never be able to thank you enough!

Marge- alot of my faith has come from you...know how much I love you dear!!!

Marina- yah, I'm letting go...and plunging into oblivion me thinks...lol


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