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**Within The Depths of You**

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Alwye
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In the space between moments


0 posted 04-14-2000 12:35 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alwye

This is dedicated to my boyfriend Jeff.  Tomorrow, April 14th is our 9 month anniversary.  I love you honey.  

Tender dewdrops of emotion
Slide upon golden skin
As tears purged in heartache
Flood with love again.

A gently flowing whisper
Traced upon the night
Offers such peaceful solace
From this blinded plight.

In shaky dreams I caught you
Within my yearning arms
And when chilled dawn did rise
Your love kept me warm.

And when a gaze turned to forever
The world began to glow
With a newly sparkling flame
Of eternity beginning to grow.

I've never felt so safe
As when within the depths of you
Nor ever wanted more badly
For our love to stay simply true.

You have my trust through time
And my love forevermore
For upon glittered wings of fate
We are destined to always soar.


 *Krista Knutson*

As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
~*Albert Schweitzer*~
© Copyright 2000 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-14-2000 12:41 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

You soar girl!  This is divine, and I am so happy for you two!  You're very lucky...Beautiful tribute to such a special day!  Catch a breeze for me, will ya, while you're up there!?!?!    
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2 posted 04-14-2000 12:52 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

How's the weather up there?
Sure wish I knew!

Jeffrey
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3 posted 04-14-2000 02:22 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Krista  This was beautiful.  Thanks.
And lucky you!



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4 posted 04-14-2000 04:34 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Congratulations, Krista.  May love always hold you true.


Michael
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5 posted 04-14-2000 07:00 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

This is really beautiful Alwye  
Congratulations!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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6 posted 04-14-2000 11:04 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

"As tears purged in heartache
Flood with love again."

You know, I love what you're saying in this line. This is a beautiful dedication to your love, Krista.  


~ Claire
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7 posted 04-14-2000 06:54 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

What a beautiful love poem!
Alwye
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8 posted 04-14-2000 10:21 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Thank you all so much!    

 *Krista Knutson*

As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
~*Albert Schweitzer*~
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9 posted 04-14-2000 11:50 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This is sooo sweet Krista...Happy 9 from me too!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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10 posted 04-15-2000 03:34 AM       View Profile for Richter_9   Email Richter_9   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richter_9

There is nothing so sweet as love growing within such a tender heart.  My congratulations, also.


Rich  
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11 posted 04-16-2000 01:31 AM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

Beautiful poem Krista!  I'm happy for you and Jeff, so strong through it all.  Happy belated 9 months, and many more of love I do hope  

 Abrahm Simons

"...Watching fate as it flows down the path we have chose" - Trent Reznor, "We're in this Together"
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Thank you all.  

 *Krista Knutson*

As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
~*Albert Schweitzer*~
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13 posted 04-16-2000 09:40 PM       View Profile for Lone Ranger   Email Lone Ranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Ranger

Wow!!
I just fell in love with this poem!!
Tell me something  , is your boyfriend a jealous guy?
You're truly a joy , you must be a lovely person!!


 "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free
It was always thus and always thus will be"
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14 posted 04-16-2000 11:46 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Congratulations, Krista! I wish you both the best!

Denise
 
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