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~ Forbidden Drink ~

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poetFemmeFatale
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~ Forbidden Drink ~

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Thick green meadows lay below
with weeping willow trees
Crisp new air blew soft around me,
barefoot in the breeze...

Lush foliage blooming everywhere
I wandered in too deep
Your fragrance there, upon the air
pure chivalry so sweet...

I heard your whisper through the trees
a voice so nigh of haunting
Yet calling to me - beckoning
my spirit trembled, daunting...

I stopped, and as I looked about
the leaves swirled 'round my feet
They danced as if to beckon me
my gaze & yours to meet...

Your laughter pure, came echoing
'twas then I saw your smile
And those eyes so pale of
crystal blue
this search for you worthwhile...

You brushed your hair so soft, aside
you took my breath away
The sunlight shimmering on your skin -
a dream here in midday...

You stepped out from the willows
as you took me by the hand
But still you had not spoken -
this I could not understand...

You led me through a thicket
which revealed a hidden gate
A secret entry nestled there -
this finding - our's by fate.

Once inside, I stood in awe -
at what mine eyes did see,
An exquisite little garden
blooming feverishly for me...

A carpet of
rose petals
stretched as far as eye could see -
With daffodils and hollyhocks -
you turned & reached for me...

With honeysuckle kisses
velvet lips crushed down on mine -
Your mouth was sweet like morning dew

intoxicating wine...

You stole my breath, my heart was faint
you held me in your arms
Your mouth, it drank so deep of me -
transfixed by your charms...

You drank of me - and drank of me
I lay a wilted flower
There upon your
bed of roses
overcome by all your power...

You lay beside me tenderly
a tear rolled down your face -
Like lovers e'er forbidden
there we died in sweet embrace...


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*Drink of me*

-poetFemmeFatale
April 13, 2000

© Copyright 2000 Gennifer David - All Rights Reserved
Parker
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... the old black rum


1 posted 04-13-2000 07:34 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

It was because I was a vampire, and a very good wine you were just like this little poem. That's what I like to hear from a woman "Drink of Me", who am I to argue.

Parker
netswan
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2 posted 04-13-2000 08:26 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Poet Femme
This is touching - as only two lovers
can be -- very well written.

Teresa King
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3 posted 04-13-2000 08:37 PM       View Profile for rojogrande   Email rojogrande   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rojogrande

Lovely poem.  Great imagery.  Loved the intimacy, as though I could here him breathing along side you.  Your sweat and his mixing, becoming one, as you two were, with one sweet embrace.
Jeffrey Carter
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4 posted 04-13-2000 08:40 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

For lack of a better word....Erotic ....oh so

Jeffrey
Janet Marie
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5 posted 04-13-2000 09:38 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Holy cow...somebody hose off Jeff LOL

Gen , this is exquisite...
so beautiful, and so well written.
its like walking the path along with you...
very pretty poem...
but I'll leave now...cause 3's a crowd... unless of course your into that scene...
err forget I said that LOLJ/K...I'll just hide over here in the bushes and take notes...
I bet I run into a few people I know  LOL

later, jm


 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon


Irish Rose
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6 posted 04-13-2000 09:42 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

Everyone should visit this place....and not alone! It was beautiful!

 Kathleen

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with you


7 posted 04-13-2000 09:52 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

pFF~ ROMANTIC,ROMANTIC,ROMANTIC! this is lovely!-SEA
poetFemmeFatale
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8 posted 04-13-2000 10:01 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Jeff's pants are on FIRE
hot dang - get a hose!
What's under them pants,
Heck, who really knows?
Could be spotted boxers
or a black satin thong -


Oh geesh, Janet fainted - -
Jeff, put some clothes on!!!


(fanning Janet with his thong....er...a.fan!)
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London


9 posted 04-13-2000 10:10 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

I've never made woopie in a rose garden ...
fell in a rose bush once though ... got a honkin big thorn up my keester ... and a gentle reminder every time I sat for the next week

Rex}>{{{{o>
poetFemmeFatale
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10 posted 04-13-2000 10:31 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Uh....Rex?  Did you say you have a honkin big keester?  May I ask - what IS a keester?  ROFLMAO      Okay, so I read/see what I want to read/see.  So shoot me!  
Rex Allen McCoy
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11 posted 04-13-2000 10:42 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

With what shall I shoot you ?
Sven
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12 posted 04-13-2000 11:37 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Um, pFF?  Have you been looking into my notebook again?  This is really good!!  

Nice to know that you haven't lost that romantic touch. . .

Excellent. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Jeffrey Carter
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13 posted 04-14-2000 01:03 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

pFF...satin breaks me out...my thongs are made of silk.....lol

Girl you are funny

Jeffrey
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14 posted 04-14-2000 01:26 AM       View Profile for WhiteNite   Email WhiteNite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhiteNite's Home Page   View IP for WhiteNite

"woha... look at all the colors maaan.." =)  I really liked this poem and I think the colors made it for me... but hey!  My eyes are BROWN!!! Get it straight girl!  J/K

Lovin' it!

 "The storm rises up when the shadows descend
every beat of my heart every day without end
I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break
till theres no more to give if thats what it takes
I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed
I will lay down my life if thats what you need
every second I live thats the promise I make"

I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =)


Michael
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15 posted 04-14-2000 04:23 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Somebody's been bitten me thinks.  My Gawd you can write beautifully when the mood strikes you.  Excellent poem, Gen.


Michael
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16 posted 04-14-2000 06:43 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

ewwwww...like the goth in you sis.  Now...where's my toothbrush?
Richter_9
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17 posted 04-14-2000 08:06 AM       View Profile for Richter_9   Email Richter_9   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richter_9

How mesmerizing these words are.  Fantastic poem.

Rich
Danny Holloway
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18 posted 04-14-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway


~~sitting in silence in admiration of your   wonderful writing talent~~~


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

poetFemmeFatale
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19 posted 04-14-2000 10:37 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

This really isn't a vampire tale !  I promise!  He didn't drink of her blood like Parker said -  
He truly kissed her deeply on the mouth, thus drinking of her, in that way.  When they kissed passionately, they both died, for it was a forbidden love...although, they took the chance for just one kiss.  (batting eyes...)  No blood drinking in MY romance stories!  hehehe  
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20 posted 04-14-2000 10:40 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is breathtaking, Gen! Very beautiful!

Denise
poetFemmeFatale
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21 posted 04-14-2000 12:13 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I just want to say how humbled I am at all your rave reviews!     I'm really not worthy.  This poem was really hard for me to write...I stumbled around with it for over 2 hours.  It's a very intimate piece for me to share, as it was written about someone in my past, who I don't even talk to anymore...alas, he inspires me to write of "love" that just couldn't be.  No matter how far he wanders, to me, he is a dear friend.  I've not been "bitten", nor have I forgotten what color your fabulous eyes are, WhiteNite...(how could I?)....*sigh*.....Just wanted to write something a little magical, and find some closure to the tale...Thank you, as it too, is one of my own most favorite pieces.  Love you guys!!  You're all so dear to me!   -poetFemme
 
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