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allimac12
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0 posted 04-13-2000 07:09 PM       View Profile for allimac12   Email allimac12   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for allimac12


Art


Mischievious lines,
Darting,
Zigging and zagging in the
Endless pursuit to
Join one another.
To form shapes and
Build from each other,
Magically creating
Curves and turns and
Figures and faces.
A hidden beat drives to the
Completion of a
Simple masterpiece.
Strange to the common eys,
Ridiculous to some,
Yet brilliant to others.
The meaning is everything.
The meaning is nothing.
Is all the world
Combined
To form
One
Sole
Piece of art
Hanging lonely in a
Vacant gallery?
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1 posted 04-13-2000 09:34 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This has a hard edged feeling to it... and if you had to describe the way I draw, the empty canvas would do..
Irish Rose
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I see the canvas behind the words.

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Art, how beautiful.  But, yet I agree with
poet divine -- I can't draw a lick, so
I draw with words ---

Great poem - and so descriptive.



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4 posted 04-13-2000 10:24 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

allimac.....We are all God's masterpiece
I'm not sure if this was the message behind this piece, but that is what I took from it

Thank you

Jeffrey
 
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