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Sir Real and the Knights of Ilusion

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Dr.Moose1
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Majestic realms once peopled
of plain ordinary folk
Expectant land illumined
by imagination stoked

Fires of some inner forge
with precision smelted sight
March forth the first division
of illusionary knights

They approach the field of battle
"Sub-concious" by the Id
An ominous land divided
by Lord Sir Real's bid

Intrepid armies clash
horrendous is the sound
Valiant efforts all expire
to litter this , their battle ground

© Copyright 2000 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-13-2000 03:31 PM       View Profile for Effigy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Effigy

Very nice. i enjoyed it greatly.
Denise
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2 posted 04-13-2000 03:47 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

So is this the cause of my writer's block perhaps? LOL   Great poem, Dr. Moose! I enjoyed this very much!

Denise
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Doc... you been sampling the meds out of your bag again... cause if so, throw some my way. A very fine vision here.  See ya at Area 51 and bring your secret decoder ring... the cat blinks Morris code and I've had one to many gin and tonics. hick'
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4 posted 04-13-2000 07:42 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I think you should do a series! I like this type of poem very much..there is an 'old world' quality to it...  
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5 posted 04-13-2000 11:19 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

I agree with PdV.  a series it should be

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6 posted 04-14-2000 06:18 AM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Effigy,
Glad you liked
D,
When all your aspirations fall short of the mark, it may be worse than writer's block .Thanks
Drew,
Hey save some of that gin for me !!!
PDV,& Jeffery ,
Funny ,but after writing this , I thought of the same thing , and decided to see if someone else would suggest it .Coming soon to a screen near you ...thanks Doc
Dr.Moose1
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7 posted 04-15-2000 11:29 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Pardon my shame-less promotion of these two , but I thought  that if I bumped them together they might make more sense
Doc

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