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Sea of Love

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Danny Holloway
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0 posted 04-13-2000 01:04 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Danny Holloway


     In a Sea of Love
       wanting to drown
         embracing arms
           not easily found

                      inner feelings
                        needing to share
                          with willing heart
                             always there

       emotions swirling
         in a raging pool
           seeking release
             from heart so full

                       one to trust
                         roll the dice
                           takin a chance
                             or thinkin twice

        a scary journey
          lovers quest
            freeing the heart
              from aching unrest

                      is it a dream?
                        lover and a friend
                          quench this thirst
                            found deep within

         so dream i shall
           for eventual day
             when love comes calling
               and decides to stay

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

© Copyright 2000 Danny Holloway - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you


1 posted 04-13-2000 01:08 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Danny~ the title got me in fast~ this is wonderful. I love the way you presented it! - SEA
Nicole
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2 posted 04-13-2000 01:39 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Reach for those dreams, Danny, they'll come true!     Very much enjoyed the formatting you used, well done.

 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown
mariee66
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3 posted 04-13-2000 01:44 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Ohhh...how very nice!
Like the format, too!
Marie
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 04-13-2000 01:55 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Danny,
Good style, good words, good thoughts, good poem.
Denise
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5 posted 04-13-2000 02:53 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful poem, Danny! Very lovely!

Denise
poetFemmeFatale
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6 posted 04-13-2000 03:27 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I see you love to dream as I do sir...although we both tremble as we dream.  My tip-toes are my best friends.     This is a beautiful poem, but of course, you know that, I'm sure!  I love it!  

*trembling and dreaming* with you!  -poetFemme
Janet Marie
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7 posted 04-13-2000 04:32 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

VERY nice danny-boy...
your such a poetic romantic...
but then what else could I expect
from my BEH??  
perfect poem Danny...*S*
why its so good...you got Gen's tippy toes  curling and she's trembling...LOL
take care, BEG


 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon


A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


8 posted 04-13-2000 05:49 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Danny this was fabulous...I like how the words llok like waves of the ocean...and the poetry as well

 "Love is not love, till you give it away"
mianna86@yahoo.com


Lone Wolf
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9 posted 04-13-2000 07:00 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Danny,
I loved this one!!  So sweet and romantic. Excellent layout and feelings from your heart.  Love those waves!!!  


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
Martie
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10 posted 04-13-2000 10:32 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Well done, Danny...loved the form!
Marge Tindal
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11 posted 04-14-2000 12:21 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Danny~
First-Class ..
all the way !
You just get better and better, my friend.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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devina
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12 posted 04-14-2000 01:15 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I have to agree with everyone Danny, you have found your way with words sweetie...this was beautiful in wanting and in dream!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Cerenity
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13 posted 04-14-2000 09:14 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Danny,

This is beautiful the first stanza is so true its hard to find that special someone to drown in love with.
Thanks for sharing,
Cerenity
hoot_owl_rn
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Danny...this is wonderful!!!  
Pepper
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15 posted 04-14-2000 09:50 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Simply Beautiful in format and words ... Love this ,  I do ......

 "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind."
Maxwell Maltz
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16 posted 04-14-2000 10:21 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

This is beautiful Danny!!! Written with hope, beauty, style, grace and the inner beauty of a man with a wonderful heart.  I loved every line and the format was wonderful.

 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

gemini shadow
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17 posted 04-16-2000 10:13 PM       View Profile for gemini shadow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemini shadow

very beautiful and romantic poem Danny
i loved the wave format
made me feel like i was on the beach with you
watching the tide roll in and out
the waves crashing.
like a cruise on the love boat  
gemini

 I want to be the face you see when you close your eyes
I want to be the touch you need every single night
I want to be your fantasy
And be your reality
And everything between
I want you to need me,
like I need you.
celine dion
Shelley
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18 posted 04-17-2000 02:37 PM       View Profile for Shelley   Email Shelley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Shelley

This gives you something to think about. It's very beautiful. Hope I never wake from this dream.

Excellent job Danny!!
Danny Holloway
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19 posted 04-17-2000 03:15 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Many thanks to all who so kindly responded to this poem.  I very much appreciate each of you taking the time to read and comment.
Happy Easter to one and all


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