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More than Moonlight

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NamelessOne
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0 posted 04-13-2000 12:57 PM       View Profile for NamelessOne   Email NamelessOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for NamelessOne

More than Moonlight


It was more than moonlight
when i was in it`s glow with you
it was more than a car ride
when it was just us two

Basking in the sunlight of your summer day
smoothed out my raging sea
taking my troubles away

there was life in the music

laughter in the air  

a flutter in my heart

impossible not to stare
the flowers smelled sweeter
water was as wine
there was an urgency to life
everything seemed to shine

But now i`m out of your favor
and the roses only scorn
the moon won`t come out
the colors seem to mourn

i can`t forget how you thrilled me
with your casual touch
and your smile and your laughter
they gave my heart a rush

You`ve taken your light from me
only darkness, a void so deep
my heart thrown into limbo
my soul put to sleep

i avoid you because i think you do the same
i don`t want to look like a fool
dagger thrusts of shame
stab my gut and twisting turn

i`m sorry that i made the mistake
i guess i`ll never learn
it`s just the one`s before never gave me such pain
it`ll be a long time before i forget you
i just hope not as long before i`m sane


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1 posted 04-13-2000 01:15 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Nameless~ I love this..... made my heart ache.....-SEA
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 04-13-2000 01:47 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

NamelessOne,
Good lines, good paint, good poem.
serenity blaze
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oohh...like a caterpillar...lovely but stings a bit...much beauty here...thank you.h
wayoutwalt
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4 posted 04-14-2000 02:23 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

this is very good nameless yur a must read i say

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5 posted 04-14-2000 02:26 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

I can certainly feel your pain.
Live life for today

Jeffrey
NamelessOne
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6 posted 04-14-2000 02:57 AM       View Profile for NamelessOne   Email NamelessOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NamelessOne

thanks one and all for your kind words
netswan
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7 posted 04-14-2000 03:04 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Sweet aching pain. I do hope that you learned
something from this lovely poem --)

Well done.

Teresa King
Michael
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8 posted 04-14-2000 04:32 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Wow - this is great.  A lot of powerful deep truths here. Good job.


Michael
marty11
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Man I'm glad to have found this place. Its filled with a bunch of great people and great poetry. I can really relate to your poem, I loved it!!!

Marty
kynder
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10 posted 04-19-2000 06:40 PM       View Profile for kynder   Email kynder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kynder

once again, your words echo the feelings in my veins.  i thought it was you that said it was the insanity that drove us...... but maybe rest stops are nice, eh?

*****kynder

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