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amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

0 posted 2000-04-13 12:36 PM


My dear I write this from my deeepest heart
As you poke it, unknowingly , with poisonous dart

This is the truth which I say in the final poem

Eversince I saw you
I decided my life got new beginning
A life full of love and goodwill
Even I told this to you then
Maybe it was too early for a decision
So I left it on probation

Due to the circumstances
We took different stances
I swear, never during those times
I've loved another woman and had no whims

I wait patiently
People say its my virtue
It would have never been, if
I hadn't met you, my queen

Don't get even the faintest idea
That I'm with someone else
I think of you and me always
As I find you in my self

There were days when you asked me,if u remember
Whether I've found someone else
My voice shaked as it made me depressed,
Because I've not made my love clear to you
But,for our friendhship to be lasting one
I had to lie that I've found one
Don't try to understand the logic
When I look back, it makes me really sick
How can you believe when I said I've found a chic ?

I'll not try to convince you anymore
As you feel I'm a dirty whore
Not to be trusted anymore
When you meet me you'll see
How much I'm in love with you dee


Trust me
I cannot say anything else for now
You'll see  my eyes when we meet and realize
The eyes see the whole world in you

Have faith in me and our love
I may have crossed boundaries
But I haven't crossed the boundary which
had been laid by our hearts,my love

I have had my own fear and suspicion
I accept and ready to pay the price for confusion
But those are crushed now.I'm newborn
As I move on with a new wisdom gained

Just remember I love only you and
Don't say goodbye,
Unitl I meet you and we spend time
We needn't curse eachother until that time

I count the days like its a trial
As I hold our love in heart vial
To hold  your hand
And let you feel my heart

It doesn't matter who're the ones keeping us apart
I've complete faith in you and our love
I'll cross the shores soon
From you, I'll wish to have boon

" Wish that keeps us together forever,for life "

Look within you and I'll do the same
To find the hearts pronounce whose name
If you still have me in you
"Hold on with trust"

I've vowed never to break your heart again
If I've caused you much pain

I'm clear as a crystal,my dear
So I say you not fear
If you listen to my heart's prayer
It's just a song of you ,my dear

Trust in me
Trust in love
Trust in lord

We're going to meet soon
As I said I'll have a boon

Trust in me
Trust in love
Trust in lord

I love you my dear


A_L

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Thanks Passions people
I'll take a break,I loved every message from everyone. You're a magnicinet kind of people.
It's time for me to work.

BTW,one of my poems got selected in In'l lib of poetry and going to be published in it. You're really an inspiration for us and our love.

A_L

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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-04-14 04:25 AM


There is much luvliness here to choose from--tho' must admit, reading pink for me is a chore!  Glad I made the effort, tho...Heartfelt, beautiful sentiment here...
(suits my mood these days...lol)  Thanks.
BTW: Congrats!  And well-deserved.

marty11
New Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 5
Lubbock, Texas
2 posted 2000-04-14 04:34 AM


WOW, great poem. Its nice to know there are people with my same problems. Your poem was very touching.
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