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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
a distinct lack of concentration is doing me in. how niave of me to think i could make any change, any difference to my life your life our lives. the same old mess will haunt me forever. this one was going to say so much, hold so much emotion. it was going to cause hearts to swell and tears to roll. but it is a bitter disapointment. well what the hell isn't? I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
although i didnt know him b4 u did i can tell u have changed his life SO much , youve changed mine a hell of a lot (for the better , definately) . we would be stuck in the midlle of no'where without you . although cant write it maybe (i think you can),emotion flows out of you . make sure the pipes never get blocked . jeeesy creeesy |
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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
although i didnt know him b4 u did i can tell u have changed his life SO much , youve changed mine a hell of a lot (for the better , definately) . we would be stuck in the midlle of no'where without you . although cant write it maybe (i think you can),emotion flows out of you . make sure the pipes never get blocked . jeeesy creeesy freedom is the right to say 2 + 2 = 4 |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***cabey, thankyou so much (twice). your word play was too subtle for my tired head, but thanks! excellent love always, lou xxx I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
We all feel like that at some point or anouther, so don't feel like you are suffering alone, if you want to talk to someone me and cabe are always about . Keep writing it the way you see it, it's the best way . With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one . |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***bakes, thanks for the offer of support. it is returned in abundence. "Keep writing it the way you see it, it's the best way" take your own advice to heart... thankyou. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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