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I'm in the wind

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Seymour Tabin
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        I'm in the wind

Today I felt the wind go by,
It whispered me a lonely sigh.
And in my heart I heard a moan.
It seemed to say I'm all alone.

I cried unto this envoys ear
In answer to this lovers fear.
This wind that came from coast to coast
This warming wind this spirits host.

And on this wind I sent my love
To circle back from high above.
To touch you like the morning dew,
With echoes of embraces too.

I'll climb the hill and wait you there.
I'll meet you in the winds ensnare.
And we'll embrace within this soar
And mingle there forevermore.

The wind will lift the meadowlark
And on its wings we will embark.



[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 04-13-2000).]
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1 posted 04-13-2000 10:26 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Great writing
flows so easily off the tongue

Jeffrey
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A windy day is a love-ly day, and this is a beauiful poem.
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Sun likes...
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Toe likes too Sy...you're getting better in your old age yanno...
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5 posted 04-13-2000 10:47 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour~
Oh, lovely .. it soars
on wings of meadowlark,
dove and takes my heart along.
You are one special fellow.
Love ya'
~*Marge*`


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Oh Yes ,i liked that one
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7 posted 04-13-2000 12:23 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Very nice.

Marina
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Seymour, Bittersweet sentiment...beautiful writing.
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Hi Sy,

This was very beautiful Sy.
  Cerenity


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Seymour~ BEAUTIFUL!!!   -SEA
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natural flow.

simply beautiful.
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Ah, this too is breathtakingly beautiful!

Denise
Seymour Tabin
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To all the wonderful people above a million thanks. Your reception of this poem was more then I had hoped for. I can not thank you enough for all the beautiful comments. Sy
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Sy,
This poem swept by like the wind, but I ran and caught it because it is so beautiful.
Wonderful words
Liz
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Elizabeth,
You should always take heed of the wind. Love Sy
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"The wind will lift the meadowlark.."

I love your couplets, Sy...
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Wonderfully written.  I pleasure to read and enjoy.
Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 04-15-2000 05:49 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nan,
It's always a pleasure to hear from you. *L*
Mike,
Thank you for the nice comment.
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Excellent Sy. . . it would seem that the wind has blown into the minds and hearts of several people here. . . it does have a way of speaking to us that way doesn't it?

Great poem my friend. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Seymour Tabin
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Thank you Sven always enjoy your comments.
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Sy said -
quote:
'And on this wind I sent my love
To circle back from high above.
To touch you like the morning dew,
With echoes of embraces too.'
I feel him on the circling wind~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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