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I'm in the wind
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I'm in the wind |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I'm in the wind Today I felt the wind go by, It whispered me a lonely sigh. And in my heart I heard a moan. It seemed to say I'm all alone. I cried unto this envoys ear In answer to this lovers fear. This wind that came from coast to coast This warming wind this spirits host. And on this wind I sent my love To circle back from high above. To touch you like the morning dew, With echoes of embraces too. I'll climb the hill and wait you there. I'll meet you in the winds ensnare. And we'll embrace within this soar And mingle there forevermore. The wind will lift the meadowlark And on its wings we will embark. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 04-13-2000).] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Great writing flows so easily off the tongue Jeffrey |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A windy day is a love-ly day, and this is a beauiful poem. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sun likes... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Toe likes too Sy...you're getting better in your old age yanno... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Oh, lovely .. it soars on wings of meadowlark, dove and takes my heart along. You are one special fellow. Love ya' ~*Marge*` ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Oh Yes ,i liked that one |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Very nice. Marina |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Seymour, Bittersweet sentiment...beautiful writing. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sy, This was very beautiful Sy. Cerenity [This message has been edited by Cerenity-1 (edited 04-13-2000).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~ BEAUTIFUL!!!  -SEA |
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weaubleau Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101MO |
natural flow. simply beautiful. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ah, this too is breathtakingly beautiful! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all the wonderful people above a million thanks. Your reception of this poem was more then I had hoped for. I can not thank you enough for all the beautiful comments. Sy |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, This poem swept by like the wind, but I ran and caught it because it is so beautiful. Wonderful words Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, You should always take heed of the wind. Love Sy |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"The wind will lift the meadowlark.." I love your couplets, Sy...  |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Wonderfully written. I pleasure to read and enjoy. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, It's always a pleasure to hear from you. *L* Mike, Thank you for the nice comment. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Sy. . . it would seem that the wind has blown into the minds and hearts of several people here. . . it does have a way of speaking to us that way doesn't it? Great poem my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Sven always enjoy your comments. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sy said - quote:I feel him on the circling wind~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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