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infinat3 sadn3ss
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0 posted 04-13-2000 09:52 AM       View Profile for infinat3 sadn3ss   Email infinat3 sadn3ss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for infinat3 sadn3ss

so hot.
voices coming from every angle ,
none of them means a thing .
questions , answers , exclaimations ? .
things enter and exit my head in an orderly fashion
memories...
             SCENE MISSING
...i should be elswhere but i have chosen to be here .
exellent .
a hint of pefume wanders into my nostrils, jump starting another memory .
today is a funny day , not quite good but not quite unbearable , but nothing to set me in that mood .
"strange weather lately",blue skies turned grey .
but metaphorically , grey skies turend black .
meanwhile...



 freedom is the right to say 2 + 2 = 4
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mete out
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1 posted 04-13-2000 10:06 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***cabes,
this is incredible.
seriously.
so many lines i could quote that seemed real to me...but i'd end up type the whole thing up again.
you really are staggering...a real mystery.

well done yet again mate..


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angelswing
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2 posted 04-14-2000 04:01 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Freedom is also the write to say that2+2 = 5, I realy thought this poem was great, and you use your code of writing and style very well .


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .
infinat3 sadn3ss
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3 posted 04-14-2000 09:52 AM       View Profile for infinat3 sadn3ss   Email infinat3 sadn3ss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for infinat3 sadn3ss

thank you both of you , tom , have you read 1984 or is it just a coincidence that it ties in ?
PericolosoAmore
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WELL THEY CALL YOU CABE, SO IF I MAY I SHALL 2, I LIKE THIS A LOT ESPECIALLY THE MISSING SCENE , I DON'T OFTEN SEE THINGS LIKE THAT. IT IS SHORT BUT SWEET.
 
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