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-- A little kiss of passion --
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-- A little kiss of passion -- |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL 
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-- A little kiss of passion -- (4-12-2000) Is your kiss authentic Do I have the only one Or is it just an action Shared with others just for fun A kiss isn't a reservation Made only with your lips You can do it holding hands Just by tightening your grip I can kiss you with my eyes Just by staring deep I can kiss you with my words And sweep you off your feet I can kiss you without motion With only my warm embrace I can kiss you with the soft caress Of my fingers on your face You see a kiss should show affection And I do prefer your lips But they're only part of the fraction It's the emotions that I miss Some kisses are simply gestures A tradition developed over time Some are just reminders That I'm yours and your mine A kiss can be an action Some are created in lust But I want a kiss of passion And it requires that you trust A kiss with no emotions It's almost like a sin Like poison on a rose Or the betrayal of a friend Just be sure that when we kiss It's something that you feel If it's just an action Then it wasn't very real --Dave "The storm rises up when the shadows descend every beat of my heart every day without end I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break till theres no more to give if thats what it takes I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed I will lay down my life if thats what you need every second I live thats the promise I make" I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh...I do like that type of kiss  |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Absolutely splendid writing...this one should be published Jeffrey |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I can kiss you with my eyes Just by staring deep I can kiss you with my words And sweep you off your feet I can kiss you without motion With only my warm embrace I can kiss you with the soft caress Of my fingers on your face You see a kiss should show affection And I do prefer your lips But they're only part of the fraction It's the emotions that I miss --------------- A kiss can be an action Some are created in lust But I want a kiss of passion And it requires that you trust A kiss with no emotions It's almost like a sin Like poison on a rose Or the betrayal of a friend ------------ this is even more perfect by morns light(smile) I forsee lots of puckering in here LOL and just to make it official... you do realize, you can no longer claim poetic block. (BIG SMILE) way cool davey-boy...way jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
My kisses are as dew they are here to wet your lips - I believe that you were thirsty thus I kissed your fingertips... A kiss to me, is comfort for it calms a trembling soul - I've not a label for it, Passion's kisses make me whole.  Working on a reply back to those brown eyes of yours, BTW! Sorry, just my 2 cents up there... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful poem! Very lovely, Dave! Denise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh yes those kisses of passion...I desire only the authentic ones. James |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Dave, Very impressive poem. I love the emotion and the truth in this one. And the truth is surely there. I wish more people would think like this!!!! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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