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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...


0 posted 04-13-2000 06:56 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for EagleOne

I dread this place, so deep & dark
A soul destroying, dangerous place
A cavernous place that holds my fears and secrets
Sometimes hidden, sometimes not
Always lurking, beckoning, taunting
Ready to awaken the terror
Erupting into my consieusnous
A place I cannot escape
Purgatory, a living hell
My memories......



 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien
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1 posted 04-13-2000 08:03 AM       View Profile for weaubleau   Email weaubleau   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for weaubleau

wow...some pretty powerful writing right there...maybe some strong feelings behind that?
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2 posted 04-13-2000 08:08 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WOW, I enjoyed this!! excellent!!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


EagleOne
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3 posted 04-13-2000 05:45 PM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

weaubleau.....thanks, words from the heart carry much power, and yes some very strong feelings here.

Dark Angel....thankyou just doesn't seem to be enough.

 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien

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4 posted 04-13-2000 07:24 PM       View Profile for allimac12   Email allimac12   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for allimac12

Amazingly converyed feeling.  The words you choose are so powerful and do the poem justice.  I really liked.
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5 posted 04-13-2000 11:12 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Encompassing

Jeffrey
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6 posted 04-14-2000 10:13 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry


Angel wings from the heavens above to gather you in and hold you safe while the memories float by for you to see....not relive.  This is so strong with emotion, You have written well my friend...I'm moved.


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

EagleOne
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7 posted 04-14-2000 05:52 PM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Butterfly..that is a wonderful thought, I thank you for your valued comments.  

 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien
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