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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2000-04-13 05:04 AM


Just this moment
frozen time
photographed
within my mind
since first I ever
met your eyes
I've danced--
to serenade of sigh.

© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-04-13 09:30 AM


I just found this lovely gem
hiding on page 2...
ooh my sweet serenity...
i do so love you...
this is so perfect...
so divine...
I feel your presence,
in every line.
Cut and paste this baby
over on my post...
then all the poets
will reply and toast.
and OH yes...
its all about eye contact for me...
looking in my poets eyes...
sets me free.

LOVE THIS ONE girlie-girl(smile)
you too,jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon



Richter_9
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since 2000-04-09
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2 posted 2000-04-13 12:46 PM


May I join you in your *sigh*?


Rich

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2000-04-14 02:14 AM


JM--love to you too--you knew I'd be up for it--didnya?  hearts in sync--winky-wink...
Love Lives...

Rich--ah but to make you sigh...after all, you MELTED me...

wayoutwalt
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4 posted 2000-04-14 02:16 AM


oooooo i like this i do
Michael
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5 posted 2000-04-14 04:36 AM


Such wistful, lovely words.  One can only smile.  

Michael

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2000-04-14 05:08 AM


JM Again--CUT & PASTE?  You know not the "slug" I rode in on...soon tho-have been drooling over PC's all week...

oooo Walt!  I like your work too!

Michael--now you ARE quick this morning...
        (One can only smile..) LMAO...
         But thank you, lovie...

angelswing
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since 2000-02-10
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7 posted 2000-04-14 07:39 AM


I am glad I *sigh*ted this one, short and sweet and especialy catchy .


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .

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