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NamelessOne
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0 posted 04-13-2000 02:08 AM       View Profile for NamelessOne   Email NamelessOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for NamelessOne


Funny Thing

just an ordinary day
reaching in my closet for a shirt
found a new one i`d only worn once
pulled it on and kept on moving
standing in front of my mirror
zipper`s up,pants on straight

what`s that on my sleeve?
oh just a hair
but wait, its not too long
but definitely longer than mine
also kind of wispy almost fine

then sunlight struck the shaft
and the memory came flooding back...

the wind from the sunroof lifted it
and i remembered
how beautiful you were

i ran my fingers through it
and said my God it`s thick

that single strand held me in rapt fascination
the color of a precious metal
divided with tawny bands of brown
it fairly sparkled
with golden color bright

and then another emotion grabbed me
and i found myself missing you
funny about the little things isn`t it

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mete out
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1 posted 04-13-2000 04:21 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***nameless one,
this poem is gorgeous.    
it is full of emotion.
it reminded me of a situation i was in a while ago.
i'll certainly be looking out for more of your work.
fantastic job.
serenity blaze
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2 posted 04-13-2000 05:14 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

ABSOLUTELY PERFECT.
netswan
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3 posted 04-13-2000 06:36 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Well done  Funny isn't it, how we can take
one thing out of a dozen and write about just
that.
NamelessOne
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since 04-09-2000
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4 posted 04-13-2000 07:03 AM       View Profile for NamelessOne   Email NamelessOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NamelessOne

thank you all so much for your replies,its funny how sometimes the smallest things can evoke such strong emotions
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


5 posted 04-13-2000 07:24 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Now you have me missing Lena...I love to think about my lady friends when I am alone..something they said...the way they looked at me...the soft way they touched me.  James
weaubleau
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since 04-06-2000
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6 posted 04-13-2000 07:44 AM       View Profile for weaubleau   Email weaubleau   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for weaubleau

it's all about the little things!

no doubt, that single hair brought on more emotion than one could ever imagine.

infinat3 sadn3ss
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somerset england


7 posted 04-13-2000 09:37 AM       View Profile for infinat3 sadn3ss   Email infinat3 sadn3ss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for infinat3 sadn3ss

so pure , fascinating and engrossing . i thought it was only me who found the little things the most significant.

 freedom is the right to say 2 + 2 = 4
A Romantic Heart
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8 posted 04-14-2000 04:40 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

This was a ROMANTIC thing..for its the little things that count!

 "Love is not love, till you give it away"
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Cerenity
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9 posted 04-15-2000 05:07 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi NamelessOne,

Through all of the thick and thin I have gone through there is one of these moments you speak of that will never leave my heart, and I thank you for sharing this poem for it shows how importain the little things are.

Thank you  Cerenity
 
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