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Sven
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0 posted 2000-04-13 01:03 AM


Sing to me a song of love
Sweeter than that of the angels above
Sing from your warm, open heart
The finest example of the musical art

Sing to me this haunting tune
A song of the stars, a song of the moon
Sing with the passion you feel in your soul
Making me feel needed, wanted, and whole

Sing to me of your life's song
Let me hear and heal the pain, held so long
Our voices together in love we'll raise
And into each other's eyes, we'll lovingly gaze

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-04-13 01:09 AM


Lyrical...in more ways than one..this is music for the soul....lovely poem, Sven.
weaubleau
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2 posted 2000-04-13 01:21 AM


do you work with music?  it seems half of your poems that i have read refer to music or sound like a song.  it's nice.
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3 posted 2000-04-13 04:58 AM


Methinks that music works with YOU...(A theme close to my heart...)  Beautiful as ever, Sven...much grats.
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4 posted 2000-04-13 07:41 AM


Sven~
Sing to me anytime, this is superb. such a loving and warm poem.
Tracie~


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5 posted 2000-04-13 10:34 PM


Sven,
Very nice work.  Hope you hear the song you long to hear someday.  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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6 posted 2000-04-13 11:27 PM


Sven

As always I am amazed by the passion with which you write. it is apparent you write from a place deep within your soul, and what a beautiful place it is. lovely, simply lovely piece of work you have here!!

Take care,
AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

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