Boy! These are so hard to write! I've tried it and it hurt!!! I think the theme is good for a Villanelle...(sounds like a villain to me)....Let us know what grade you got on it.. aren't you glad you post here and we can help with your homework..now about that math...........
Mystik~ This is truly well done. I'm so pleased for you that your English teacher appreciates your poetry.
My goodness, does that thought bring back memories of a ninth grade English teacher, Mr. Joseph Pearce who was the first teacher who ever told me that I had a talent for writing. I've never forgotten him ... and was pleased to be able to present him with my first web-published poem before he passed away.
Thank you for bringing his memory to the surface of my heart.
I'm sure you will remember your teacher with the same fondness that I do.
Wonderful writing, talented young man ! ~*Marge*~
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Such a dark side of you, but very good nonetheless! I have written a poem or two about a sleep which I don't ever awake from. I think we all feel like that at one time or another...we just need time to stop, so we can dust ourselves off, and rest a bit. Great job you did with this!
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