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Rex Allen McCoy
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0 posted 2000-04-12 09:45 PM



True Love Never Dies
~~~


Those  days  have  faded  but  not  from  sight
those  days  of  beauty  my  thoughts  unfold
When  dreams  of  life  from  morn  till  night
were  love  sweet  love  so  true  and  bold
~
New  days  have  brought  the  bloom  of  rose
through  a   milder  calmer  sea
But  nothing's  half  as  sweet  to  hold
as  loves  young  dream  of  you  with  me
~
Your  hallowed  form  embedded  deep
my  hands  still  feel  your  trace
Your  touch  still  haunts  my  every  thought
your  essence  thrills  my  taste
~
When  morning  breaks  your  lingered  dream
and  daylight  dawns  upon  your  face
I  smile  and  snuggle  close  to  you
my  hand  slides  round  your  waist
~~~


 I'm not ugly!
I'm just visually challenged!




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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-04-12 10:00 PM


so so sweet Rex Allen--jealous of you two, over here--glad to see ya still around!  
This was lovely and sincere...enjoyed it much!

Jeffrey Carter
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2 posted 2000-04-12 10:09 PM


How sweet is  to have true love.
God I am SO jealous

Jeffrey

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3 posted 2000-04-12 10:50 PM


This is sooooo beautiful....**sigh** Amazing what love can do when it's REAL and not just a word.

 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.


Meadowmuse
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4 posted 2000-04-12 11:02 PM


I'll agree with all of the above on all three counts, Rex. This is a splendid declaration of love's true life.

~ Claire

Lady Web
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5 posted 2000-04-12 11:03 PM


Wow, I relate to some of your feelings. For i had my true love once then lost, just recently found him again. Keep up the good work
WhtDove
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6 posted 2000-04-12 11:56 PM


Big *sigh*
A Romantic Heart
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7 posted 2000-04-13 02:15 AM


Bravo!!!well done!!!lovely!!!

 "Love is not love, till you give it away"
mianna86@yahoo.com



Rex Allen McCoy
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8 posted 2000-04-13 04:26 PM


serenity ... Thankyou ... I'll still be around for a month or so
  
Jeffrey Carter ... thanks ... true love is sweet but we have to be careful not to take it for granted
  
Butterflies_dont_cry ... It definately takes two thats for sure ... one doesn't cut it
  
Claire ... thankyou ... a thumbs up from you is like winning a blue ribbon
  
Lady Web ... good to hear from you ... hope your true love is never lost again
  
WhtDove ... what a nice thing to say
  
A Romantic Heart ... thankyou very much
  




[This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 04-13-2000).]

TerryW
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9 posted 2000-04-13 04:59 PM


Rex,
    I like the feeling I get from reading this one -- it stimulates my visionsry side!
Very nice use of imagery.  

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Marina
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10 posted 2000-04-13 05:56 PM


Oh sure Rex go making me all jealous at my hour of need! LOL.  It was a truly wonderful poem.

Marina

Rex Allen McCoy
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11 posted 2000-04-13 09:44 PM


TerryW ... thanks Terry ... I'm glad you liked it ... thanks for letting me know
  

Marina ... lol ...   ... Sorry ...  


[This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 04-13-2000).]

Irish Rose
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12 posted 2000-04-13 09:58 PM


Holy smokes! This is beautiful!

 Kathleen


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13 posted 2000-04-13 10:51 PM


Very beautiful, Rex!

Denise

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14 posted 2000-04-13 10:55 PM


Rex~
I love the romantic side of you !  
This is just beautiful.
And I'm sure she agrees.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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hoot_owl_rn
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15 posted 2000-04-14 07:45 AM


Lovely  
Rex Allen McCoy
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16 posted 2000-04-14 04:05 PM


Irish Rose ...   ... I havn't heard the term 'Holy Smokes' since I was a wipper snapper ... Thanks

Denise ... thankyou again

Marge ... I have the strange feeling that my wife agrees with you ... to be sure

hoot_owl_rn ... thankyou for always reading my work ... it means a lot to me

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