Hmm... beutiful work.. do I see a hidden message in there? Or maybe it's only hidden to me.
I see a statement about dreaming and singing of being in love, although you've got no partner and thus no wings to fly... one of those "I'm not going to let it get me down" attitudes... I love it.
But then it's probably just a pretty poem about a bird in a cage. =)
BTW, welcome to Passions. Keep on writing, your work is music to my ears.
"The storm rises up when the shadows descend every beat of my heart every day without end I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break till theres no more to give if thats what it takes I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed I will lay down my life if thats what you need every second I live thats the promise I make"
I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =)
[This message has been edited by WhiteNite (edited 04-12-2000).]
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