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Lady Web
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0 posted 04-12-2000 09:05 PM       View Profile for Lady Web   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady Web


It time to fly

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1 posted 04-12-2000 09:15 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Oh , what a lovely poem you write

Welcome to a new bunch of friends.
You will love it here.

Jeffrey
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Hmm... beutiful work.. do I see a hidden message in there?  Or maybe it's only hidden to me.

I see a statement about dreaming and singing of being in love, although you've got no partner and thus no wings to fly... one of those "I'm not going to let it get me down" attitudes... I love it.

But then it's probably just a pretty poem about a bird in a cage.   =)

BTW, welcome to Passions. Keep on writing, your work is music to my ears.

 "The storm rises up when the shadows descend
every beat of my heart every day without end
I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break
till theres no more to give if thats what it takes
I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed
I will lay down my life if thats what you need
every second I live thats the promise I make"

I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know.  =)




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Lady Web
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3 posted 04-12-2000 09:33 PM       View Profile for Lady Web   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady Web

This poem has a hidden message, it is a
metaphor for all who have or are trying to
excell and rise to to new heights, despite
lifes obstacles. For me that is.
Butterflies_dont_cry
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Welcome to Passions!! I relate to this well...the butterfly in a jar so to speak.  You wrote well capturing many feelings with few words.  Bravo!


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

Lady Web
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5 posted 04-12-2000 11:09 PM       View Profile for Lady Web   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady Web

Thank you all for that warm welcome, just testing the waters. Never placed any poems on line before. I'm like a newborn, everything is new.
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Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special message. I enjoyed your poem and hope you'll feel like posting again...our guidelines are in the links on the question mark icon on the side of the forum...have fun!  
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7 posted 04-13-2000 05:56 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***lady web,
firstly, welcome to passions.you will settle in perfectly with your talent.
secondly, clipped wings or no, you WILL excell.      
a fantastic entry into the passions family.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


 
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