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Not Quite Yet Born

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lucky
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0 posted 04-12-2000 05:19 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for lucky

Not Quite Yet Born

pain breathes
controllably lying defenseless near
your arms welcomes as I was
in courage by a fiend to be gone this
journey never linking for a weak or so that it cold
get used this way it did too I’m so glad butt sad you there
yet your presents brings such relief to this aura vaginal draft
and purr puss of mist little chapter which was to leaf you
into a piece full come for table ground but if you no
thing like me you be tried of the same mold
contempt or airy voids that sneaks to
glory fly woke gather then tall
ants which draft tick
ally skewers art and graces
such in dived level souls with the
drudge airy of woke..! I can soy tan any
be leaf which is the truth of this fawn ally if own
lye manna festered threw a single palm or many foams
thy music your peach the very mass sagé of finessé
in appear ants and at tit lewd shod be in tart
con trash to ease kind of odor ease
very same will not rest pond
to a poets rule of dumb
which pears to be just act
ally what they lethal ridge ally
cordon wit newt protest or sin sure
as a mark of ally ants in this fare fate of
finessé... so if I woke at it yon enough
will fat make it add mire able odor
I weight for the voids to rule
ball looming nocturne
ally true in neat..?


 

[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 04-18-2000).]
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hsystems
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1 posted 04-12-2000 05:31 PM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

Lucky - this made me cry, as it would any parent.  I think I'll give my 8-month-old daughter an extra kiss as she takes her nap.  Thank you so much for sharing this poignant and obviously deeply personal poem!


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Martie
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2 posted 04-12-2000 05:48 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Lucky, my heart hurts from reading the tender tears of this poem.
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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Oh, sweetheart, thank you for writing of this sorrowful part of our lives, in such beautiful, tender words; and thank you even more for your love.
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4 posted 04-12-2000 08:04 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lucky~
April Dawn ... what a beautiful name.

Tears here at your thoughtfulness.
The love between you and Rosemary
is so touching.  
I know that your losses have been
many ... and the treasures precious.
May God hold you both in his tender mercy.
You are beautiful people.
Love
~*Marge*~


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mete out
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***lucky,
i agree with marge, april dawn is an exquisite name.
this poem deserves praise also.
it is very brave of you to post such a deeply personal piece here. thankyou for doing so.
touching as it rips your heart out.  
fantastic.  


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