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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2000-04-12 04:55 PM


A little time

I don't want to possess you
nor have you possess me.
Still I would like a little time to spend with you..
do you have anytime to spend with me?
I suppose your work and family and friends
tend to keep you busy and time free.
But if you have no time for a new found friend
that leaves no time for me.
I guess I'm just asking for a chance
to find out if I like you
and of course you get the same chance
to discover your feelings too.
Unless of course you already know the feelings that you feel.
It would be nice if you could let me know as new feelings are revealed.
I wonder if your feelings for me are good or are they bad.
Will they make me happy or would they make me sad?
Only a little time with you will give my hopes and dreams a place to come true.
Or will time once again be breaking my lonely heart in two.

Jameslee@April-12-2000
forlovelyLena



[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 04-12-2000).]

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hsystems
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1 posted 2000-04-12 05:17 PM


Wonderful poem, James - Lena is a lucky girl!  Hope things work out for you!


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A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 2000-04-12 05:36 PM


yes I would agree that Lena is a lucky girl!
Gee..sure wish I could be Lena!!!

 "Love is not love, till you give it away"
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Marina
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3 posted 2000-04-12 05:46 PM


Yesterday a very wise poet told me that love is always a gamble.....perhaps he took is own advice.  A very realistic approach to entering a new relationship.  

Marina

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2000-04-13 08:44 AM


Thank you Troy...I spent a little time with her earlier tonight and I still love her.  She told me she believes I love her.
Thanks Romantic and I wish that all women were as romantic as you.  You are a special angel.
Thank you Marina...realistic and also a desire from deep in my heart...I read this to Lena tonight and she appreciated the message.  She really liked the end where I said for lovely Lena.
James  

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5 posted 2000-04-13 10:00 AM


Lovely James...she's one lucky lady  
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6 posted 2000-04-13 10:43 AM


James, We never know unless we try.
Go for it!

Jeffrey

Marina
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7 posted 2000-04-13 11:23 AM


James, that it wonderful.  I hope you two hit it off...or least stay friends.  We never kmow what the future holds.

Marina

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8 posted 2000-04-13 11:30 AM


Best of luck James ,she sounds like a wonderful lady
JamesMichael
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9 posted 2000-04-13 04:56 PM


Thank you Hoot Owl, Jeffrey, Marina, and Nameless one for your wonderful comments.  I would love to be her friend.   I give you my sincere appreciation.  James
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