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Miss Abagail Mannering
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 136
byron, il

0 posted 2000-04-12 04:30 PM


A Rose for my Froggy
by Miss Abagail Mannering
4/12/2000

Petals soft as velveteen,
color, rich- red as wine.
Stem and leaves and emerald green-
thorns that prick one's pride.

Sweet tear drops
fall on budding crowns,
then trickle slowly
to SPLAT on the ground.

Love is the meaning
of a beautiful rose...
which I try to express
in the lines I compose....

For, I've found my Prince
after all the POND SCUM...
it is you, my Froggy...
it is you that I love.

Dedicated to my beau for our 7th month. anniversary comin' up on the 18th. part of this poem is a snippet from an old poem written for an old love. I always loved one particular snippet from that old poem..and have been tryin' to come up with new verses for it for 3 years...I finally did it!


 "Ya have to kiss a lot of frogs before you meet your prince... just watch out for all the pond scum!!!"

© Copyright 2000 Shanna Casinger - All Rights Reserved
Miss Abagail Mannering
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 136
byron, il
1 posted 2000-04-12 05:16 PM


*sniffles* still no replies to this one...*pouts*
Miss Abagail Mannering
Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136
byron, il
2 posted 2000-04-12 05:16 PM


*sniffles* still no replies to this one...*pouts*

 "Ya have to kiss a lot of frogs before you meet your prince... just watch out for all the pond scum!!!"

hsystems
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 319
Murray, UT, USA
3 posted 2000-04-12 05:25 PM


Miss Abagail - this is a very nice poem, and you have a cute pout.  Thanks for sharing both!

  
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 Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm


[This message has been edited by hsystems (edited 04-12-2000).]

netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
4 posted 2000-04-12 07:20 PM


A rose is a rose is a frog --)
Your clever start of this poem was very
picturesque. The ending was a bit of a
suprise.  Good luck with froggie --)

And, yes, sometimes, you do have to wade
through frogs until you get the prince.

Keep up the writing --)

Teresa King

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