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RAM
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0 posted 04-12-2000 04:16 PM       View Profile for RAM   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RAM

          Never the Last


Head tilts slightly to the left
right stream hugs a nostril's flair
moistened lips from mourning's dew
salty kisses find a home
one drop flirts with Newton's Law
fat words scribbled through the blur
fun house prism now set free
lightly tracing down the cheek
flow is quickened
or is slowed
as this trace is linked in dream
to the softest caring touch
from a treasured finger's tip.


  RAM  1/22/96

© Copyright 2000 RAM - All Rights Reserved
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RAM, this is beautiful!
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2 posted 04-12-2000 05:58 PM       View Profile for RAM   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RAM

thanks, Martie.

Rick
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Lovely imagery, RAM!

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I crested on it! And that's good!!

 Kathleen

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Excellent writing, RAM! Wonderful!

Denise
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Ram,
Good words, good thoughts, good poem.
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This put excellent imagery in my mind.   Beautiful work here.  
 
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