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star 15
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0 posted 04-12-2000 04:11 PM       View Profile for star 15   Email star 15   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for star 15

here is a little poem i made up when i was board

by the way sorry about the wrong name before!!

the light turned red
the sky was blue
i stood ther wating
and i didn't know what to do.
i look to my left
i look to my right
there were no cars in sight
i was suddnley now whee to be seen
the lingt turned green.




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1 posted 04-13-2000 06:31 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Star 15,

This is great, these kind of poems are fun.
Welcome to Passions, hope to see more of your work.

Cerenity
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2 posted 04-13-2000 08:43 PM       View Profile for rojogrande   Email rojogrande   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rojogrande

Lovely.  Don't hate me for this, I mean I'm only 17, however last I checked, a Haiku was only 3 lines and 17 syllables.  However, the poem itself was good just not listed correctly.
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3 posted 04-13-2000 11:21 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Haiku?
The read was great but I didn't see a haiku

Jeffrey
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4 posted 04-14-2000 03:40 PM       View Profile for star 15   Email star 15   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for star 15

   sorry guys and girls. I thought it was one but i guess i named it wrong. it is a short poem.  Would that be correct?  

reply if i'm wrong.

sorry about the spelling.

sincerly,
star 15
p.s. i'm going to change the name okay!?
ha ha      

 

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