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Corinne
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0 posted 2000-04-12 04:06 PM


Soon, the mysteries will unravel,
why the sun caresses clouds pink,
millions of stars and planets to travel,
the answers all there in an eye blink.

The miles that separate physicality,
have done little to prevent fate’s call,
and soon this will become a reality,
onto the Milky Way’s path we fall.

How does love fit into this scheme?
Soon we shall see for ourselves,
love is at the core of all dreams,
in the place where the soul dwells.

I pray we do not let fear play out,
an evil villain always lurking
hiding behind a shadow of doubt,
never resting, always working.

There is a level of confidence in us,
together we form bonds so strong,
joining two waves caught in crest,
with love to carry us along.

© 2000 CM Bailey



[This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 04-12-2000).]

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RAM
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1 posted 2000-04-12 04:11 PM


fear layered in peace
comfort from touches well known
memories revived

©  RAM  4/12/00

Martie
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2 posted 2000-04-12 05:10 PM


Sound like an important time for you...beautiful poem!
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3 posted 2000-04-12 07:40 PM


Corinne~
This is indeed a 'special' time
for two of you ...  

'How does love fit into this scheme?
Soon we shall see for ourselves,
love is at the core of all dreams,
in the place where the soul dwells.'

Your soul is dwelling in the right place.
This is filled with lovely anticipation.
~*Marge*~


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Corinne
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4 posted 2000-04-12 09:29 PM


RAM, beautiful poetic response, thank you.

Martie, well, we shall "soon" see.

Marge - hope you are right!

Cor

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5 posted 2000-04-12 09:34 PM


Corrine,
I have to agree with Marge and I am anxiously antissipating your next post

Jeffrey

Denise
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6 posted 2000-04-13 12:40 PM


This is soooooo lovely, Corinne!

Denise

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