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Romantic Serenade... an invitation to PARKER...and challenge to poets...Spring Fever!

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Janet Marie
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0 posted 04-12-2000 03:33 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Janet Marie

Thank you sweet Parker for your very kind replies,
I guess you know by now ... you evoke many a SIGH.
Your romantic poems ... make the ladies of Passions swoon,
your write such lovely poems, you sing a lovely tune.
I am so very flattered by your offer to serenade ...
and I just read the first gift of that offer made.
Im so pleased you got your poetry fixx --
I thought I'd throw this one in the mix.
I'll make a deal here with you on this poem post...
think of it as a poetic challenge ... I wish to host.
You serenade me...I'll serenade you...
and I'm hoping many others will join in too.
Lets just see how romantic we can get...
I dont know about you ... I've not tired of romance yet.
Lets fill this post with poems ... of love, devotion, and trust ...
and just for our added pleasue ... a healthy dose of "innocent lust."  
We will usher in spring ... with romance, class, and grace,
and hopefully put a smile of pleasure on our face...
We can even have some fun ... while we rhyme and flirt...
if we all promise to TRY to behave ... what could it hurt. (OH DEAR) LOL
So tell me my poetic friends are you up to this game?
Let's make sweet Parker live up to his romantic fame.


(nothing like a little pressure huh Parker?)(smile)

all in fun...always  jm
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A Romantic Heart
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1 posted 04-12-2000 05:52 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Oh Janet...lol this one is right up my alley! I look forward to the other replies and postings!I wish someone would serenade me with a poem..then I will serenade them back...you go girl...this will be fun!haha!

†"Love is not love, till you give it away"
mianna86@yahoo.com




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Parker
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2 posted 04-12-2000 06:28 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

So here I am, in the process of doing a little research, to try and secretly put out a nice little serenading poem. And what comes up before me, in Neon letters no less, but your little challenge telling me to put my butt in gear. This is no fair, and it sure spoiled the surprise. I hope I can live up to this pedestal you've put me on..... and for that matter can't say I've ever done it on a pedestal.  

Parker
Janet Marie
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3 posted 04-12-2000 07:06 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

oh Parker hon, you misunderstand--
I would never rush you or put you on demand.
I was only teasing trying to make you smile...
and hoping we all could post --
some love poems here for awhile...
I would never wish to ruin your sweet surprise...
only wanted to write a poem for your kind poetic eyes.
As for you up on a pedestal... there you do belong...
OH please dont make me beg...sing us your sweet song.
And if you serenade me...I'll serenade you...
and we will see who else wants joins in the fun too.

(as for the doing it on a pedestal...
are you still free saturday) LOLOL
KIDDING JUST KIDDING..trying to make you smile  

Parker
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4 posted 04-12-2000 07:16 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Oh boy do I have smiles..... So are you supplying the pedestal or should I bring my own.  
Janet Marie
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5 posted 04-12-2000 07:21 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

LOL
im glad your smiling....i feel better now
  
I have lots of pedestals, all shapes sizes and colors LOL
see ya SAT  
with BELLS on LOL
thanks Parker
jm


PS to challenge...I was thinking it would be more fun and make it more of a challenge IF we put all the poems here and WHEN ever we reply...we try to make it a poetic reply...are ya game?



[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 04-12-2000).]
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6 posted 04-12-2000 07:31 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Romantic Heart, I must confess that I have been afraid
To tell you what I think of you in some sweet serenade.
Though I have loved your picture and your words since your first day
When it comes time to spell it out I don't know what to say.

I know by how you speak of love you are the one for me
And I would love to know if we can click romantically.
You paint such vivid pictures with your poetry so sweet
And I can just imagine how it will be if we meet.

I picture you in dress of white curled up on the divan.
When I come in, you realize that I'm your only man.
You slowly rise to greet me....oh, the beauty of your face!
I cannot help but take you in a passionate embrace.

Your lips meet mine and I explode. My body is on fire
And I am lost quite hopelessly in passion and desire.
A gentle moan escapes my lips and I hear one from you
And all the world has disappeared except for just we two.

With skin as soft as your sweet words I'm dazzled by your charms
And I could handle anything with you there in my arms.
Although I've never felt your kiss, I'm sure it must be sweet.
Intoxicated I would be by your lips, should we meet.

So there you have them...my emotions boldly on parade
Trying to explain my thoughts in this poor serenade.
So, if you think I'm not too bad and maybe kinda groovy
Just let me know and I'll come by and....let's take in a movie!!!
Janet Marie
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7 posted 04-12-2000 07:38 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

OH WOW!!!!!!!!!
we bow before the master...
all else pales in your light...
this poem is of perfection
a most glorious and lovely site

PERFECT Balladeer

and yes... you are most groovy...
you come on by and I will throw dinner in before the movie


thank you!! jm

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 04-12-2000).]
A Romantic Heart
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8 posted 04-12-2000 10:52 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

        

A Romantic Serenade-(song I wrote-written for? To Janets challenge)
                          
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My love, shall I have this dance,
I will serenade you with song,
I will hold thy heart into my hands,
Embrace you close all night long,

Underneath the clouds, the heavens above,
Let me shower you with MY song of love...

(song I wrote-One True Love)
You are my heart I sing,
To me your everything,
I will give you love,
What you dream of,

My one true love...


And ever you should cry,
I'll kiss the tears from your eyes,
Forever true....
I'll always love you...

My one true love,

And when the winds come and go...
I'll be the fortress in the rain,
I'll be your comfort through the pain,

Near or far, where ever you are...

My one true love......(goes high with music solo)

I would go to the ends of the earth,
cross the shores and the seas...
deeper than all eternity...

To show you...to give you my love.....

(Solo)

And as the years come and go,
Your heart I will forever hold,
Together you and me...

No regrets will I find,
For your love was true to mine,
I will be free.....

Knowing...My one true love.....Truely loved me.....

My One.....True.....Love.....(whisper)I will love you forever...My love!




†"Love is not love, till you give it away"
mianna86@yahoo.com




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Butterflies_dont_cry
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9 posted 04-12-2000 11:12 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry


I'm thinking pedestals and such
Movies..dinner and packing a lunch
To sit and watch the sparks fly
And softly whisper..... "oh my"
What a thought my S.S. has had
and thinking ohhhhhhh she's "bad"  
One more thing we do share  
For this she has a flare!
A challenge offered to eachother
one question....Parker do you have a brother???
lol    
Way to go J.M.  
This should be fun  


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

Krysondra
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10 posted 04-12-2000 11:15 PM       View Profile for Krysondra   Email Krysondra   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Krysondra

A serenade?  A game to play?
More fun when we have more.
A simple little poem
To even up the score...

I'll send my love a a smile today;
I'll send my love a kiss.
I'll send my love a little note
So that he won't miss.

For when he's not around, you see,
I miss his bright green eyes.
I miss the way he says my name.
I miss the way he sighs.

Good thing that he's waiting.
Good thing that he's near.
For I think that I might tell you
More than you want to hear.

So, serenade and sing your songs.
We'll all take the chance,
And wait for the reply,
To know with whom we dance.

And as for me,
I'm off to see
Those dancing bright green eyes
Before the night grows older
And he begins to sigh.


  ~ Krysondra ~
~Angel of Illusion~
Lady Web
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11 posted 04-12-2000 11:21 PM       View Profile for Lady Web   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady Web

Very,very nice work 2 thumbs up!!!
Your very good with words from the heart
Janet Marie
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12 posted 04-13-2000 12:32 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

oooh you guys are really good...
this will heat things up...it sure should.
Lots of romance, desire and Passion...
looks love is still in style and in fashion.
All us poets better get ready to start...
Balladeer already confessed to Romantic Heart.
Romantic Heart wrote us such a beautiful love filled song-
and Butterfly dropped by to sing along.
Krysondra wrote a most lovely and perfect serenade...
and I wrote this corny verse...my nights bill is paid. (lol)

jm

whos next???



[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 04-13-2000).]
weaubleau
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13 posted 04-13-2000 01:07 AM       View Profile for weaubleau   Email weaubleau   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for weaubleau

all of this beautiful verse
set before my eye,
romance is in the air,
so i guess i'll give it a try...

i have to admit, i'm new here,
i've never seen your faces,
i'm not sure who's my favorite, yet,
so can i feel each of your embraces?

with loads of love to share,
i have enough for all,
so whomever is feeling excited,
needs only to give me a call.

for it only takes a single rhyme
to put me in the mood,
and thanks to all this poetry,
it wouldn't take much to get me nude...

with one soft kiss i could take you away
your heart racing all the while,
and as i hear your breath in my ear,
i promise to make you smile...

and after the ecstasy has come and gone
i still will hold you close,
for i am not the ass that it sounds,
i only wrote this for a post

weaubleau
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14 posted 04-13-2000 01:17 AM       View Profile for weaubleau   Email weaubleau   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for weaubleau

i hope i didn't offend anyone here...
i just read this again and i realize it might have been inappropriate, so i just wanted everyone to know that it was completely light-hearted and i just wrote what popped into my head.  i'm really am sorry to all who find it unapppealing...
Janet Marie
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15 posted 04-13-2000 01:22 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

I was just about to sign off
and turn off the light..
ready to call it a day...
and sleep away the night...
but then I saw this reply
and I just gotta tell ya...
it really caught my eye.
weaebleau this is really great...
and its so nice to meet you
this poetic reply is romantic
and quite spicy too.
thanks for joining in the fun
just one word of advice before I go...
put your clothes back on darlin...
your best side is now on show.  

LOL thanks WB EXCELLENT POEM
NICE and SPICY....
thanx for joining in.
A Romantic Heart
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16 posted 04-13-2000 01:24 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Balladeer, I think your groovey,
What shall be the movie?

Not only are you sweet,
But a romantic poet to beat,

I loved your poem, I am humbly honored,
To have such a man seranade me,

With Beautiful words of love and poetry,
You have amazed me, I must surrender,
My knight was right before me,
Shareing a heart so tender,

Not only can you write lovely poetry,
But your words of humor are so funny,

So what tune will you sing your love song to?
I will bring some candles as we dance under the moon...


 "Love is not love, till you give it away"
mianna86@yahoo.com


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17 posted 04-13-2000 02:15 AM       View Profile for WhiteNite   Email WhiteNite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhiteNite's Home Page   View IP for WhiteNite



I think I've exhausted my romantic juices for the night
I had a few thoughts earlier, but now they're just not right

I wanted to ask for a kiss, and make it sound real nice
But now I'm just too tired, and I think weaubleau stole my spice

Balladeer was so charming, he swept RH off her feet
Jan is going for Parker, with whom I can't compete

Krysondra so filled with skill, seems to have left the party soon
She had a date with an Angel, I think his eyes made her swoon

There was a pretty butterfly dancing early in the game
Now she's waiting for Parker's brother, what was his name?

So here I stand as usual, a flower on the wall
Watching the pretty people dance, waiting for one to fall

My flirtatious Femme is still missing from this happy occasion
Maybe she'll dance with me with a little bit of persuasion

(smile)

------------------------------------------------------
I do have a poem ready to post I'm just letting it sit on my computer for the night to make sure there's nothing I want to change when I wake up refreshed in the morning. =)  I'm not quite as skilled as some of you... takes me three hours to get one to sound worthy of your eyes and you guys can rattle them off in minutes....   Maybe Ill get better with practice. =)

Night my lovely poets, have fun or die trying... see ya tomorrow.

†"The storm rises up when the shadows descend
every beat of my heart every day without end
I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break
till theres no more to give if thats what it takes
I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed
I will lay down my life if thats what you need
every second I live thats the promise I make"

I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know.  =)




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18 posted 04-13-2000 02:24 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

White knight come back and stay,
You have the right words to play,

If I had a chance I will dance,
For a Fair maiden needs her knight,

To dance underneath the stars so bright,
Your poetry I do admire,

We could seranade as we promenade,
This dance of loves passionate desire,


 "Love is not love, till you give it away"
mianna86@yahoo.com


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19 posted 04-13-2000 08:50 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

All the replies are SO darn GOOD...
you poets met the challenge so well--
just like I knew you would.
This is fun...making us smile,
and inspiring too...
you all write with such stlye.
Balladeer got his reply from Romantic Heart,
WOW I think a dance under the moon...
is a perfect place to start.
And much to my sheer delight...
I even got a poem--
out of my pal Whitenite...
and OH its a good one too,
he's made his romantic claim--
he even snuck in flirt or two  
His words were so divine...
he got me inspired again,
and feeling fine.
And back comes the lovley Romantic Heart with reply...
and the glimmer of romance,
in her smiling eyes.
I do believe there is romance in the air...
who else is feeling frisky...
please take this dare.


jm is smiling.
whos next?
Parker
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20 posted 04-13-2000 06:17 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

She Waits

Iíve never sang a love song
Or wrote a sonnet for you
But, Iíll sing a song of loves refrain
Just to steal a kiss or two

She waits with unguarded passions
Like the heart that sings this tune,
And asks the unbridled questions?
In whispers to the crescent moon.

Oh enchanter of earthly lovers,
Send a spell that I can use
tell cupid I need his wonder
and some arrows to shoot my muse

She waits this darling of passions
For a sign that might get through
And we watch with wishful emotions
At a dream, that we all dream too.

Oh enchanter of earthly lovers,
Send a spell that she can use
Take the heart that put her under
And bind it to her with loving glue.

She waits this poet of passions
For the moon to help her through
I wonder if he is listening
If not, thereís only one thing to do!

Forget him and kiss me you fool.


Parker  April 13, 2000
"For Janet Marie"




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Janet Marie
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21 posted 04-13-2000 07:05 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Parker my poetic friend ...
you make me sigh and swoon.
You are the crowned prince of romance,
all us chicks think you hung the moon.
You words are heaven sent,
no woman could ask for more,
and of my challenge ...
this perfect poem settles the score.
You wrote a SO very, lovely song ...
a beautiful, sweet, serenade.
Its beauty will last forever,
these poetic words to never fade.
I am so honored that you would do this ...
and I'm delightfully giddy ...
that you wish to steal a kiss.
I'm also touched by you ---
that you asked cupid to help me ...
that's so very kind of you ...
to offer up that plea.
For you...just like I ...
patiently wait for loves sign.
I know your heart longs for another ...
a lovely poet of rhyme.
And while I'm tempted ...
to steal a kiss or two,
I hope you'll understand ...
that my heart remains true.
I will wait here --
with you and the moon ...
and we'll write new verse--
to make our poets sigh and swoon.
How can they resist our poems...
our love they do define.
Parker and Janet Marie ...
their hearts belong to their partners in rhyme.
jm


THANK YOU PARKER!!
This poem was very beautiful and I am so complimented that you read and included pieces of my poems in this.
You made my day with your sweet gesture.  

ok romantic fools...whos next
take care, jm


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23 posted 04-13-2000 08:15 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

....whispering to Janet, "Who's that flower on the wall?"
"He looks to be quite handsome standing there so dark and tall..."
"Those brown eyes captivate me, should I ask him for this dance?"
"I wonder if he'll think I'm just a flirt, & ditch this chance?"
Janet whispers back, "How the heck am I to know?"
"Girl, just don't make a snack of him - - go easy, take it slow!"

      
I look across the crowded room & make my way to him...
I bat my eyes & then I see his ever sexy grin...
I stop right smack in front of him & kneel down on both knees -
"Sir WhiteNite, I am asking you to dance this dance.....er...please?"

(batting eyes as if begging!)  

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24 posted 04-13-2000 08:38 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Um...I'm not sure how this thread works Janet, was I suppose to reply to Marge since I posted underneath her???  Uh....I'm willing to attempt to profess my love for her, if I have to.....(ahem)  Here goes:   (blushing)  

Er.....There is this gal I know
and her name is Mercy Marge -
She gets my blood a pumpin'
when she takes poetic charge!
I like to hold her in my arms
and gaze into her eyes...
I thought I had to have a man -
she took me by surprise!
I chase her through the meadows
where we get mosquito bit -
and I tell ya, when we fool around
I have to be half-lit !!  
(Ahem...)  

I've done some thinking Mercy Marge,
you're not the one for me -
You lack the plumbing that I need
I'm straight as straight can be!!!


Sorry Marge, I'm just not feeling the *groove* with ya girl - I hope you understand... LOL  That chemistry just isn't there toots.  (leaving stage in a heated blush with pinkish cheeks for sure!)  

Janet Marie
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25 posted 04-13-2000 09:06 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

HI guys...
I just saw Gens question..,
you may post a poem, or a poetic reply to WHO ever you wish...if you want to profess your "love" for another poet here in Passions(or not) or simply flirt harmlessly with all of them... feel free...if your feeling really poetically friskey..TAKE ON THE WHOLE THREAD LOL

its all in fun --no real rules

But I gotta tell ya seeing Gen flirt with Marge just made my day....when I stop laughing..Ill reply LOLOLOLOL

whos next ???
 
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