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Will You Tell Me?

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Lone Wolf
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0 posted 04-12-2000 03:17 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lone Wolf

If things are different
In the next three months
And you change your mind
Will you tell me?

If those old feelings
Come back again
And love begins to sprout
Will you tell me?

If we are able to talk
Without arguing all the time
And can speak rationally
Will you tell me?

If you begin to see
That I have changed
And you like who I am
Will you tell me?

If you see that I still love you
For who you really are inside
And accept you wholly and completely
Will you tell me?

If time apart is all you needed
To collect your thoughts
And you decide you want to come home
Will you tell me?


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 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
© Copyright 2000 Jennifer L. Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Effigy
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1 posted 04-12-2000 03:27 PM       View Profile for Effigy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Effigy

Very well done. I can totally understand. It is like you took the thoughts right from my mind.
Beki
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2 posted 04-12-2000 03:51 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

Simply said, but spoken from the heart...I wish you luck, I hope  whomever this is for does tell you
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3 posted 04-12-2000 03:56 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Lone Wolf~ Hugs to you... this is so sweet. Loved the way it made me feel. -SEA
hsystems
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4 posted 04-12-2000 05:34 PM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

Lone Wolf - this poem really touched me.  I hope it speaks to your beloved's heart as it has to mine!


Troy

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Lone Wolf
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5 posted 04-12-2000 11:38 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Effigy,
Thank you, it is always nice to touch another.  Sorry that you can relate so well.  Hope things go better for you.

Beki,
Thanks....need all the luck I can get right now.  I hope so too.

SEA,
Glad you liked it.  Thanks for the hugs, needed that today!!!  

Troy,
Hi and glad it spoke to your heart.  Hope it speaks to his too, but you never know.  So nice to touch someone with my writing.  Thank you!!  


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
Meadowmuse
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6 posted 04-13-2000 12:03 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Such sincere writing...best wishes to you...

~ Claire
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7 posted 04-13-2000 12:27 AM       View Profile for weaubleau   Email weaubleau   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for weaubleau

this is a wonderful poem written from the heart.

i really liked it alot.

the style also reminded me of a style that i like to use myself...that also scored this piece some major brownie points!
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8 posted 04-13-2000 12:29 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

LW, great poem. . . from the heart. . .I am sure that he (or she?) will tell you. . . I don't think that they could hide it. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

amazon_lover
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9 posted 04-13-2000 12:56 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi lonewolf!

It's a lovely one straight from the heart.
I'm sure the person loves you very much. Good luc in your love. When you're together write to me.
*Hugs*
A_L


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"Love is not love which alters when alteration finds"
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amazon_lover
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10 posted 04-13-2000 01:03 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi lonewolf!
Good luc and see more from u!!

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amazon_lover
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11 posted 04-13-2000 01:04 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi lonewolf!
Good luc and see more from u!!


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Danny Holloway
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12 posted 04-13-2000 07:14 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

LW, nice poem.  Hope that "someone" tells you what you want to hear.  Sounds like a heartfelt plea in this poem.
Nice writing as usual.


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

Lone Wolf
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13 posted 04-13-2000 10:31 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Claire,
Thank you!!!

Weaubleau,
thanks and glad you liked it.  Didn't even know I could get brownie points here!!!  LOL.  

Sven,
Yes, it is from the heart. I know they Couldn't hide it even if they wanted to.  Thanks.

A_L,
Thank you and not so sure I am loved.  I will let you know!!

Danny,
Not sure it will be what I want to hear, but I just want the truth.  It was heartfelt....just my thoughts at the time.  Kind of wondering aloud on paper if that makes sense?  Hope so.  Thank you!!!     


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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