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My Rose |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Do you hear the whispers, ...whispers of the night, Calling out come fly with me, ...upon love's wings of flight? A' sail on winds that call your name, ...sweet Rose of my desire, We shall soar amongst night's stars, ...ever climbing higher. Adrift upon the winds of time, ...past glow of Luna's light, As Polaris guides our way, ...our hearts as one unite. Do not you feel the feathered touch, ...of kiss upon your brow, As I take you in my arms, ...and to my Rose avow... Forever and forevermore, ...am touched by welkin's light, Together we shall sail the skies, ...you are my Rose, my night. [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 04-12-2000).] |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mike~ this is wonderful.  -SEA |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You oft use the rose in your poetry but never so beautifully as in this magical poem! Wonderful!!! |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is simply beautiful Mike! I love it! Denise |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
(Picking myself up off floor, cause I fell outta my chair!) Okay....I can't take it no more! I read the first stanza, and I KNEW this was gonna be good - did I say good? I meant fabulously exquisite! I just HAVE to know who this lucky lady is, so I can shake her hand! Man oh man.....Mike, you have a way with sending everyone spiraling into magical oblivion with your words...I just can't say that enough!!! (pounding fist on desk!) I can't take it!!! Out of all the guys that write here, you have to be one of the best when it comes to that tender "magical" touch. I'm not just saying that either....Within your words, I could fly forever! <<<  |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Throughout all your poems, you display the beauty of a rose like no other poet, I will pledge thee, the Rose king!Whose beauty of heart and words astound me! "Love is not love, till you give it away" mianna86@yahoo.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ Very, very nice. You send a lovely bouquet ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"C" is, indeed, a lucky lady... Someday perhaps you'll tell me about your fixation with roses - it's certainly a pleasant one to have...  |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
What woman could resist such a lovely invitation? This is exquisite, as said before MIke..but theh your poetry always is |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is SO beautiful wow what perfect words... exceptional expressions "Do you hear the whispers, ...whispers of the night, Calling out come fly with me, ...upon love's wings of flight?" poetry in motion here...and in perfection. VERY nice. take care, m Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Your enchanted words have more beauty then the rose, Mike...this is spectacular writing! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
I have received a wonderful bouquet of comments from ten beautiful blossoms whose each individual style and beauty graces Passions on a regular basis. Thank you all so much. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Mike, Hey! Let the rest of the guys get some attention...lol Great poem....it even moved ME...lol Jeffrey |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Very cool. Lucky girl indeed. "The storm rises up when the shadows descend every beat of my heart every day without end I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break till theres no more to give if thats what it takes I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed I will lay down my life if thats what you need every second I live thats the promise I make" I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Very pretty! I am quite impressed...beautiful work you have here. Made me smile. Thank you. Take care, AMY ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Elliott Junior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 35Chapel Hill, NC |
i love the ballad stanza. it has a rustic feeling about it... |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Mike, Thi is a very well written piece of work. Your meter and rhyme were perfect. Excellent. David2 |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Ahhh.....ummmm....oohhhhh.. I'm not prejudice, I'm not!!! I loved it. Kathleen |
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ElektraXOXO Junior Member
since 2000-04-07
Posts 30San Antonio Tx |
I loved it! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"Forever and forevermore," ...such a beautiful piece of writing. ~ Claire |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
I want to thank you all for replying. It is very satisfying to see your poems are enjoyed . David2, from someone who writes as well as you do, the comment is really appreciated. Claire, you write so beautifully, to receive such a comment brightens the day. Jeffrey, where exactly did you move? (sorry, my sick sense of humor) glad you enjoyed. Elektra, thank you so much. Beki, to the Queen of haiku, thank you for reading and replying. Elliot, will see if Roger Whittaker is interested in singing... *smile* thanks for the comment. Aimster, so glad you enjoyed the poem. Irish Rose, you have to know I like your name... *smile* Take care all and have a great day. [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 04-13-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Geesh...wonders why her parents named her Ruth and her sister Rose...thinks about changing her name Nice poem Mike |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Beautiful ... just beautiful! I loved this one! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Wow!!!!!!whal a lovely poem.Enjoyed your poem!!!!!! ) |
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