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My Rose

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Mike
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0 posted 04-12-2000 01:44 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mike

Do you hear the whispers,
...whispers of the night,
Calling out come fly with me,
...upon love's wings of flight?

A' sail on winds that call your name,
...sweet Rose of my desire,
We shall soar amongst night's stars,
...ever climbing higher.

Adrift upon the winds of time,
...past glow of Luna's light,
As Polaris guides our way,
...our hearts as one unite.

Do not you feel the feathered touch,
...of kiss upon your brow,
As I take you in my arms,
...and to my Rose avow...

Forever and forevermore,
...am touched by welkin's light,
Together we shall sail the skies,
...you are my Rose, my night.

[This message has been edited by Mike (edited 04-12-2000).]
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1 posted 04-12-2000 01:49 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Mike~ this is wonderful. -SEA
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2 posted 04-12-2000 01:50 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

You oft use the rose in your poetry but never so beautifully as in this magical poem! Wonderful!!!
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3 posted 04-12-2000 01:52 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is simply beautiful Mike! I love it!

Denise
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4 posted 04-12-2000 02:49 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

(Picking myself up off floor, cause I fell outta my chair!)  Okay....I can't take it no more!  I read the first stanza, and I KNEW this was gonna be good - did I say good?  I meant fabulously exquisite!  I just HAVE to know who this lucky lady is, so I can shake her hand!  Man oh man.....Mike, you have a way with sending everyone spiraling into magical oblivion with your words...I just can't say that enough!!!  (pounding fist on desk!)  I can't take it!!!  

Out of all the guys that write here, you have to be one of the best when it comes to that tender "magical" touch.  I'm not just saying that either....Within your words, I could fly forever!  

<<<>>>  
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5 posted 04-12-2000 02:58 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Throughout all your poems, you display the beauty of a rose like no other poet, I will pledge thee, the Rose king!Whose beauty of heart and words astound me!

 "Love is not love, till you give it away"
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6 posted 04-12-2000 03:00 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Mike~
Very, very nice.
You send a lovely bouquet !
~*Marge*~


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7 posted 04-12-2000 03:32 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

"C" is, indeed, a lucky lady... Someday perhaps you'll tell me about your fixation with roses - it's certainly a pleasant one to have...
Beki
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8 posted 04-12-2000 03:49 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

What woman could resist such a lovely invitation? This is exquisite, as said before MIke..but theh your poetry always is  
Janet Marie
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9 posted 04-12-2000 04:08 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

this is SO beautiful
wow what perfect words...
exceptional expressions

"Do you hear the whispers,
...whispers of the night,
Calling out come fly with me,
...upon love's wings of flight?"

poetry in motion here...and in perfection.
VERY nice.
take care, m


 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon


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10 posted 04-12-2000 05:07 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Your enchanted words have more beauty then the rose, Mike...this is spectacular writing!
Mike
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11 posted 04-12-2000 09:06 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

I have received a wonderful bouquet of comments from ten beautiful blossoms whose each individual style and beauty graces Passions on a regular basis. Thank you all so much.
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12 posted 04-12-2000 09:11 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Mike,

Hey! Let the rest of the guys get some attention...lol

Great poem....it even moved ME...lol

Jeffrey
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13 posted 04-12-2000 09:13 PM       View Profile for WhiteNite   Email WhiteNite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhiteNite's Home Page   View IP for WhiteNite

Very cool.  Lucky girl indeed.

 "The storm rises up when the shadows descend
every beat of my heart every day without end
I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break
till theres no more to give if thats what it takes
I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed
I will lay down my life if thats what you need
every second I live thats the promise I make"

I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =)


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14 posted 04-12-2000 09:15 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Very pretty! I am quite impressed...beautiful work you have here. Made me smile. Thank you. Take care,

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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15 posted 04-12-2000 09:16 PM       View Profile for Elliott   Email Elliott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elliott

i love the ballad stanza. it has a rustic feeling about it...
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16 posted 04-12-2000 09:29 PM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

Mike,
   Thi is a very well written piece of work. Your meter and rhyme were perfect. Excellent.
             David2
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17 posted 04-12-2000 09:49 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

Ahhh.....ummmm....oohhhhh..

I'm not prejudice, I'm not!!!

I loved it.



 Kathleen

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18 posted 04-12-2000 10:19 PM       View Profile for ElektraXOXO   Email ElektraXOXO   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ElektraXOXO

I loved it!
Meadowmuse
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19 posted 04-12-2000 11:28 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

"Forever and forevermore,"

...such a beautiful piece of writing.

~ Claire
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20 posted 04-13-2000 08:42 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

I want to thank you all for replying.  It is very satisfying to see your poems are enjoyed .  David2, from someone who writes as well as you do, the comment is really appreciated.  Claire, you write so beautifully, to receive such a comment brightens the day.  Jeffrey, where exactly did you move?  (sorry, my sick sense of humor) glad you enjoyed.  Elektra, thank you so much.  Beki, to the Queen of haiku, thank you for reading and replying. Elliot, will see if Roger Whittaker is interested in singing... *smile*  thanks for the comment.
Aimster, so glad you enjoyed the poem.  Irish Rose, you have to know I like your name...  *smile*   Take care all and have a great day.

[This message has been edited by Mike (edited 04-13-2000).]
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Geesh...wonders why her parents named her Ruth and her sister Rose...thinks about changing her name   Nice poem Mike  
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22 posted 04-13-2000 10:06 AM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

Beautiful ... just beautiful!  I loved this one!
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Wow!!!!!!whal a lovely poem.Enjoyed your poem!!!!!! )
 
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