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Unfinished Dance

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Effigy
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0 posted 04-12-2000 12:15 PM       View Profile for Effigy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Effigy

Life and Death stand in a room,
Life with her glass slippers on,
Death with his reapers gone.
Life extends her hand,
and Death accepts it graciously.

The music, it begins to play,
while life and death begin to sway.
Two things together that should not be,
a love of Death,
a life with thee.
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1 posted 04-12-2000 12:39 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Effigy~ this is so neat! Love the images.-SEA
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Ooohhh....very spooky feeling this gives me!  Very powerful images in just 2 stanzas!  I almost feel "nervous" as they dance!  Bravo!
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Hi Effigy,

Humanity is obsessed with death yes, but graciously lives life to the fullest before submitting to thee.
This was wonderful, and welcome to passions,

Cerenity


[This message has been edited by Cerenity-1 (edited 04-13-2000).]
 
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