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serenity blaze
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                THIS
              has gone
            beyond express
                LOVE?
         myself put to the test...

              Why oh why
             did I allow?
               Why love?
               Why trust?
            Why you?  Why now?

     Why the break of dawn at crypt?
    Whoever would have dreamt of this?
     How now, can I have hope, appease?
    How sweetly must I whimper, "please?"

      What is it I must do for you?
                Tell me.
     Hopeless. I'm in love with you.

      Now I am fit for nothing else.
                Linger...
           lost in lonely hell.
            Secret of my heart,
                DO TELL...
© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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Serenity this was original! Just be you!
Seems after that we are fit for nothing else until it all wears off and once again we can be us.

 <*\\\><

YOUR LIFE IS NOT A COINCIDENCE. IT'S A REFLECTION OF YOU!


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2 posted 04-12-2000 09:27 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie



    Why the break of dawn at crypt?
    Whoever would have dreamt of this?
     How now, can I have hope, appease?
    How sweetly must I whimper, "please?"
-----------------

what a spendid way to start my day *S*
this is so perect girl...so full of your fragile sweet heart and your longing
i love this side of you.
love this poem too
you too *S*
take care my serenity sweet
jm


 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon


serenity blaze
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3 posted 04-12-2000 09:37 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Dovie--thank you--you are indeed a 'luv'--
       And unfortunately, THIS IS myself
       these days...and no, I'm not too sure
       who that self is...or even who myself
       WAS...but--if it's about discovery--
       I'm game.

Janet Marie--me understandin' twin--how much
       I appreciate your thoughtfulness is,
       well, beyond express...difficult days,
       these are, and I know how well you
       know--a cheeky kiss back atchya! love.
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State of constant confusion!


4 posted 04-12-2000 09:43 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

I loved this ... it speaks volumes

Jeffrey
Michael
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serenity,  there is no secret in any mans heart that will answer your questions here.

"Waht is it I must do"  -  "Do Tell"

If love and happiness are not found in you just being you, they will not be found at all.  You are precious as you are, never change that for anyone.

Michael
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Beautiful poem serenity ... but as Michael
said ... don't you change a thing ... your perfect as you are

Rex}>{{{{o>
serenity blaze
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7 posted 04-13-2000 12:44 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Okay everybody, c'mon--GROUP HUG!!!
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I think someone is very lucky to have your heart.  If they don't know it already, just whisper it in their ear.


Rich
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Beautiful poem, Serenity!

Denise
 
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