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A Love Letter Engraved Across Thy Heart

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


0 posted 04-12-2000 04:24 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for A Romantic Heart


My love, I dream of thy tender kiss, thy soft touch,
For I eat of thy words, as food to thy soul,

My heart has become withered, as a rose without dew,
Mine eyes feast upon the buffet of your soul, needing you,

My love, must I endure anymore wait?, the longing to be loved, to be cherished?

Your poetry is blood of my veins,
Your love, a waterfall,falling all over me,as rain

For I am drunk on your wine,
Thy words do intoxicate me,

Sing your song, from pen and hand,
Let your breath, breathe all around me,

Must I die, to be inside you?
To inhale all that you are?

Come to me my love, let us dance lifes dances,
Underneath the silken moonlight,

My mouth is parched and dry,
Begging for thy wet kisses,

I beg of thee to answer thy request,
Suffering adorns my heart,

For ones soul tis not complete,
Without the other part,

Let the angels of love be in thy mist,
Our eyes meet,into loves journey of bliss,

Inspiration, my muse, wine unto my vessel,
I beg of thy love, Let my love devour thy heart,

What must I do? Sing loves tunes, upon thy ear?
Cry a river full of tears?

My love, whatever the price, the cost,
Ten thousand diamonds or more,

Your sweet love is worth all,
To sail from shore to shore,

This poem I leave,while we are apart,
A request of thy love,
To be loved,

A love letter engraved across thy heart.








 "Love is not love, till you give it away"
mianna86@yahoo.com


© Copyright 2000 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 04-12-2000 04:35 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Sometimes your work simply mesmerizes me.  This is one of those times.  I can feel the heart yearning behind this.


Michael
A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 04-12-2000 04:49 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Michael..funny you should say that, I was just responding to your poem and I felt the same about you ...mesmerized,enchanted,mooved,inspired,etc... Thanks...I feel valued, with a compliment like that from a poet like you!!!!

 "Love is not love, till you give it away"
mianna86@yahoo.com


hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 04-12-2000 10:10 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nicely done  
Danny Holloway
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4 posted 04-12-2000 10:25 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Is there any doubt that you are in LOVE????
Beautifully written in the style that is uniquely yours.


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

A Romantic Heart
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5 posted 04-12-2000 02:51 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Thanks Hoot!

Danny...I want to be in love like this...
Thanks for seeing my style!

Ps. this Poem was inspired by another poet on passions...?(Who had written something about silken skin, moonlight)


 "Love is not love, till you give it away"
mianna86@yahoo.com


JamesMichael
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6 posted 04-12-2000 04:37 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Soft and tender words that soothe my heart.  James
A Romantic Heart
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7 posted 04-12-2000 05:33 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

James your a sweetie! glad to have soothed your heart!

 "Love is not love, till you give it away"
mianna86@yahoo.com


Richter_9
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8 posted 04-12-2000 05:41 PM       View Profile for Richter_9   Email Richter_9   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richter_9

I think we ALL would like to be in love like this.  Very beautiful poetry.


Rich
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9 posted 04-12-2000 05:46 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Thanks Rich for your lovely reply! I WOULD like to be in love like this? But for now I must dream!

 "Love is not love, till you give it away"
mianna86@yahoo.com


Rose Petal
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10 posted 04-13-2000 03:43 AM       View Profile for Rose Petal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rose Petal

RH, I am a true fan of shakespeare,This one caught my eye.Ihaven't got the courage to post yet, but I enjoy reading romantic poems such as this! WOW!
sweetcollege_girl
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11 posted 03-28-2001 12:57 PM       View Profile for sweetcollege_girl   Email sweetcollege_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sweetcollege_girl

I really liked this one. Good work!  

~*~SCG~*~

Justbleu
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12 posted 06-29-2001 12:42 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I was just looking around and found this wonderful piece....nicely done!!

Bridgette  

Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side

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