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Servant of life

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devil_tongue
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0 posted 04-12-2000 03:20 AM       View Profile for devil_tongue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devil_tongue

I dwell admist the haze,
Of melancholy emotions.
The dark shadows lean taller,
And conceal my wounded face.

The stench of misery,
Sends ripples up my nose.
Disgracing what was a human,
But is now a ghastly creature.

Memories taunt my shattered heart,
And pull the strings attatched.
I am a mere puppet now,
A despondent flask of life.
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1 posted 04-12-2000 06:14 AM       View Profile for Esmeralda Ponsonby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Esmeralda Ponsonby

Wow, such intensity, and well written, I could see the strings at the end. Awesome piece of writing.
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Thanks for the reply.  

 
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