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Why So Cruel My Love?

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Ella
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0 posted 04-12-2000 02:50 AM       View Profile for Ella   Email Ella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ella


Can you see me?
I'm in your mind.
I'm the one you left behind.

You took my heart,
And part of my soul.
Tore it out and left a hole.

You abused my mind,
You never stop.
You always took and I never got.

You said you loved me,
You told this lie.
I was naive and I did buy.

Two years ago,
You made me whole.
You made me woman I gave you that role.

Now you come here,
And shove in my face.
That you have managed to have me replaced.

We said we loved,
We managed to believe.
How we were gullible I'll never concieve.

I don't want to see you,
I can't believe you asked.
How would I get through it?
When it's all just a farce?

I didn't think you were cruel,
Now I understand.
She has changed your ways,
You are a new man.

I don't want to hear you,
Just to say hello.
I just want to be able to let you go.

No tears for you,
I will shed.
I've got your love,
Just not your head.

When you want me,
Come and say so.
Cause although I wont see you,
I wont let you go.
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1 posted 04-12-2000 02:54 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Ella~ Welcome! I don't think he is worth your love. Sounds like a jerk...you desirve better!-SEA
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2 posted 04-12-2000 03:16 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

First of all welcome to passions. You are going to love it here. It's like a big family.
I enjoyed your post great writing

Jeffrey
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3 posted 04-12-2000 03:05 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! Check your email for a special welcome.... I also agree...this guy is not worthy of you...great poem by the way!
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4 posted 04-12-2000 08:21 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Ella~
Welcome to the Passion's family.
This is a haunting poem.
Sometimes the head says go ...
but the heart says NO !
Truthfully ?  Listen to your heart !
Hope to see more from you.
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 04-12-2000 08:31 PM       View Profile for WhiteNite   Email WhiteNite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhiteNite's Home Page   View IP for WhiteNite

Wow... this is awesome... welcome to Passions.

 "The storm rises up when the shadows descend
every beat of my heart every day without end
I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break
till theres no more to give if thats what it takes
I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed
I will lay down my life if thats what you need
every second I live thats the promise I make"

I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =)


 
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