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SEA
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0 posted 04-11-2000 11:29 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA

Your love is a miracle
a treasure in my life
I am so honored
being your wife

You are honest,
so sweet and it's true
I'm constantly amazed
by all that you do

You are patient,
gentle and kind
Each day new joys,
with you I find

You are so funny,
loyal and incredibly smart,
Your love completely
fills my heart

You are handsome,
yet modest and shy
but you know you melt me
with a wink of your eye

You are everything
I could ever need and more,
You are my husband,
the man I adore.
-SEA-




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WhiteNite
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1 posted 04-11-2000 11:30 PM       View Profile for WhiteNite   Email WhiteNite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhiteNite's Home Page   View IP for WhiteNite

Awwww... lucky guy

 "The storm rises up when the shadows descend
every beat of my heart every day without end
I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break
till theres no more to give if thats what it takes
I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed
I will lay down my life if thats what you need
every second I live thats the promise I make"

I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =)
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2 posted 04-11-2000 11:34 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

And this is how love should be, SEA~
Lucky both of you  
Marie~
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3 posted 04-11-2000 11:48 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

WhiteNite~ thanks for reading, I'm the lucky one!

Mariee~ yes, this is how it should be!   I'm so glad this is the way it is for us!-SEA
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4 posted 04-11-2000 11:49 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

What a beautiful love you have.
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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5 posted 04-12-2000 12:11 AM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

Oh, how beautifully you put into words, my own love for my husband!  I'll have to show him, and I thank you for giving me even more ways to say how I feel about him!
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Lovely, tender, loving poem - well worded and much appreciated!
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I would think your husband would be very touched by this.  Any husband would be.  There are far too few love poems in this world, between married couples who know such deep and special love.

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6 posted 04-12-2000 01:15 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

sea-girlie girl
this is YOUR best

how sweet and perfect...
nice to know the honeymoon aint over
how long ya been married to this dreamboat?
very cool poem.
take care, jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon


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7 posted 04-12-2000 01:22 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Janet~ THANK YOU!! you are much too kind...we have been married almost 3 years and have been together 6 years, but I've known him since I was 14 years old, we dated in high school. Can you say "Love Story?!" -SEA
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8 posted 04-12-2000 02:26 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Your poem offers hope to all of us lonely hearts

Jeffrey
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I can only hope that one day someone should feel as strongly for me.  A very nice poem.
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10 posted 04-12-2000 03:48 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Jeffrey~ I'm glad!

Effigy~someday, someone will
-SEA
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A very lucky man he is.


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12 posted 04-12-2000 07:34 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Beautiful!  
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13 posted 04-12-2000 08:04 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

How dare you flaunt your happiness that way!!! LOL!

Sea, you an your husband are truly blessed to have one another. Was this poem, like, to get him to do the dishes or take out the garbage? hehe. No, probably not. Your sincerity shines through, sea. I'm very happy for you.
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14 posted 04-12-2000 08:18 PM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

Dear SEA - I just read your little note on another poem, and turned and hollered to my husband - "hey! She home schools too!  Wow!  Where's her e-mail addresss?  What!  She doesn't have one?  Oh, man, I've got to contact her, even if only for one sentence!"  He turned and grinned at me.  "Well, leave her a message somewhere!"  He suggested.
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Here I am again, still loving your poem, and to tell you and we have home-schooled for fifteen years!  Most of our children have never been prisoner inside a schoolroom.  Our last school-aged daughter is graduating this spring.  What am I going to do?  I have loved it so much!  And yes, it's great to take those days off, and just enjoy each other.  Oh, I wish you would write me sometime about homeschooling.  mountainrecluse@yahoo.com
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15 posted 04-13-2000 02:16 AM       View Profile for Ella   Email Ella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ella

Your poem is absolutly beautiful. You sound like you have the most adorable husband in the world. You definately lead us to believe in love.

Ella
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16 posted 04-13-2000 11:03 AM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

Does he swoon for you? He better, you got me swooning now SEA...*L*
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17 posted 04-13-2000 11:16 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

It's your husband that's the lucky one,
To have a gal like you,
It's obvious in the way you write,
Cuz you're one of very few.
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SEA, nice poem about that very significant other of yours.

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

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19 posted 04-13-2000 01:27 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Richter_9~ yes he is!LOL  

Poet~ thanks!  

Balladeer~ actually, he had called to tell me he bought me a new vaccuum cleaner and a playstation game I wanted, and then I wrote this   He is wonderful, he reads my mind and does for me unselfishly. BTW~ I never make my man do household chores!

Ella~ thanks!   I do!  

JML~ he didn't exactly swoon, but he liked the poem,you made me BLUSH!!  

Toe~ hugs to you sweet man!  

Danny~ thanks!  
-SEA

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Wishing I could find a guy like this...     You are truly blessed, SEA!

Hugs, m'friend ~ Becka
 
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