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two lil poems by me

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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 04-11-2000 10:41 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for wayoutwalt


When I Think About You

I think of sunny days
Running through the park
And passionate displays
Lying in the dark

Of a candelit night
A sudden gust of wind
You saying it's alright
It doesn't have to end

When the only light remains
Cut deeply into your eyes
Neither one of us complains
Hearing other lovers cry

Faith in You

I can't do what the others do
It's too late for me
I can only ask of you
Will you wait for me

If you do
I promise to
Make the world of you
And the sky
Won't ask me why
I base the world on you

I dip my hand into a silver stream
And I drink of you
I slip my mind into and endless dream
And I think of you





 All Day I Dream About Stanzas!!




[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 04-11-2000).]
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Mike
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1 posted 04-11-2000 10:45 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Nicely done.  Enjoyed.
bobbycat
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2 posted 04-12-2000 12:02 AM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Awww.....how sweet!  I enjoyed these poems!  

Bobbycat =^..^=


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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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3 posted 04-12-2000 12:14 AM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

I'm stunned by the tenderness in these poems.
Particularly touched by these words "I dip my hand into a silver stream And I drink of you
I slip my mind into an endless dream And I think of you" these are words as beautiful as any ever written.
wayoutwalt
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4 posted 04-12-2000 05:50 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

thanx mike bobby and rosemary yuh these lil ditties are couple my lil faves...greeting card companies here i come or yuh

 All Day I Dream About Stanzas!!
Nan
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5 posted 04-12-2000 07:39 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Neato..... I like the last stanza best...
WhtDove
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6 posted 04-12-2000 08:51 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

WOW Walt! This is fantastic bud! What a romantic  

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hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 04-12-2000 09:42 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Walt...you're turning into a sentimental fool on me here with all this romance stuff....and I like it  
Mistikman
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8 posted 04-12-2000 10:58 AM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mistikman

yep yep yep, definately a hopeless romantic   These are great walt
Denise
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9 posted 04-12-2000 11:18 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful, Walt! I, too, like the last stanza the best!

Denise
wayoutwalt
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10 posted 04-12-2000 06:22 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

two lil poems by me  
netswan
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Nice flow and great thoughts.  Love them.
Keep on writing!
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