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poetFemmeFatale
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0 posted 04-11-2000 08:44 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

- - Sensual Clay - -


Take me now
I am sensual clay
manipulate me
have your way...

Knead my soul
shape it to your delight
create as you wish
do me right...

Mold me now
please manipulate me
I yield to your touch
set me free...

Sculptor mine -
I am yours - have your way
your hands on my flesh
I'll obey...

Hands so strong
pressing into me deep
I'm sensual clay
make me weep...

Take me now
I'll obey your command
I'm putty - it's true
in your hand.

~~~~~~~~
-poetFemmeFatale
April 11, 2000


© Copyright 2000 Gennifer David - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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1 posted 04-11-2000 09:04 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Woohoo one to get the ol ticker going  
Mike
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2 posted 04-11-2000 09:06 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Gulp.
poetFemmeFatale
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3 posted 04-11-2000 09:16 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

hehehe  WhtDove, I didn't know you smoked!  

and er....Mike?  Was that *gulp* a compliment??  

ROFLMAO
Jeffrey Carter
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4 posted 04-11-2000 09:49 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

PFF?  Can I be your potter....LOL

Jeffrey
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5 posted 04-11-2000 09:50 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

ouch.  Like I needed a jump-start!  (It sure is getting warm in here....but as they say in N'awlins--it's not the heat--it's the HUMIDITY...)  y'know I LOVED this...Great work pFF...thank you.
Rex Allen McCoy
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6 posted 04-11-2000 09:59 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

When I turn 50 and get my little red sport car ... can I call you?

Rex}>{{{{o>
WhiteNite
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7 posted 04-11-2000 10:06 PM       View Profile for WhiteNite   Email WhiteNite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhiteNite's Home Page   View IP for WhiteNite

Man do I NV you!  Two in one day?  I'm lucky to put together two words that rhyme.. much les two entire poems.... well... and have them come out as nice as these anyways...

Ya know... if I had a lover that wrote poetry like this..... well... lets just say it made me thirst for a kiss. =)

 "The storm rises up when the shadows descend
every beat of my heart every day without end
I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break
till theres no more to give if thats what it takes
I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed
I will lay down my life if thats what you need
every second I live thats the promise I make"

I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =)
Janet Marie
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8 posted 04-11-2000 10:11 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

well, i knew this one was gonna start something    LOL

perfect poem femme...i bet i know where an find another version that will melt clay LOL
HEY BEH...STOP THAT !!! LOL
(inside joke) ask danny LOL
later girl,
jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon


Sven
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9 posted 04-12-2000 12:23 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Wow. . . this is great!!  pFF, you always find new ways to amaze me. . .

Excellent my friend. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Elliott
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10 posted 04-12-2000 12:27 AM       View Profile for Elliott   Email Elliott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elliott

you rock.
Marina
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11 posted 04-12-2000 12:28 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

OK....did you do anything but write poetry today??? You could have done wonders with this one in adult let me tell ya!  You are hot today...ANOTHER excellent piece.  three strikes now your out!

Marina
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12 posted 04-12-2000 12:28 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

AH, Femme, you could have, er, be the perfect bust. I'd love to take you up on your offer but I don't wanna be arrested for statue-atory something-or-other  
SEA
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with you


13 posted 04-12-2000 12:42 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

pFF~ Whew! Hot!Hot!Hot!! Love it. -SEA
JamesMichael
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14 posted 04-12-2000 05:49 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I love this...a sensual fantasy...James
hoot_owl_rn
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15 posted 04-12-2000 09:56 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very nicely written Gen  
poetFemmeFatale
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16 posted 04-12-2000 11:55 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Jeffrey - - ROFLMAO !!  You make me giggle, and now I need to pee!  (oops, did I say that? )  LOL

serenity - - Sorry...didn't mean to *JOLT* you!  

Rex - - You kill me man!    Yes - you can!  LOL

WhiteNite - - (still puckering!)  LOL  You're so funny, now I know why JM likes you!  hehe

JanetMarie - - No fair!  No inside jokes!  Where's that Danny when you need him??   DANNY !!??

Sven - - **blushing**      Thank you sir.  

Elliott - - Comments like that make me feel ~young~ again!  hehe  THANKS!

Marina - - Whew...yep...all out.  

Balladeer - -  ROFLMAO You're just FULL of funnies lately, aren't you?  Quack!

SEA - - *hosing you off*  

JmLee - - My fantasy...well, one of them!  

Ruth - - LOL Thank you Ruthie!  

Sheesh...I'm glad you all liked this, you don't know how hard it was to write something like this and not use....well, you know...WORDS like I like to use!   I tried to keep it *low key* so as to not get thrown out of here!  LOL  Thanks for all the gulping and such!  LOL  I'll see you all in Adult !  
RSEvans
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17 posted 04-13-2000 07:17 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

WOW a third time today!  I better fly though, or I'll be late for work.  Plus, with the way this one is headed I might not make it out the door after the next without...well...stepping off.  
weaubleau
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18 posted 04-13-2000 07:47 AM       View Profile for weaubleau   Email weaubleau   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for weaubleau

wow.  that's all i'm going to say...wow.
 
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