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Esmeralda Ponsonby
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0 posted 04-11-2000 05:57 PM       View Profile for Esmeralda Ponsonby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Esmeralda Ponsonby

Rain Of Passion

Thine ocean strength takes hold o'er me
as upon thy coast we ride forever to be.
Mine hands griping onto hips of perfection
for thine body a temple of loves infection.

Ye halt thy horse in a sudden jolt of tyranny
my eyes reaching for yours in full sympathy.
Thy energy expressing visional intoxication
leading calmly into unanticipated reciprocation.

Thy sand below us a soft pliable guarantee
to lie our bodies below full moon's balcony.
Our desire's free to explore universal floatation
beyond thy earth's atmospheric realm of creation.

I drown in thy blue sea forever milord's nominee
for only unto thee would I solemnly in love agree.
Taking me deeply within your intriguing fascination
as your rain of passion drenches me in precipitation.
© Copyright 2000 Esmeralda Ponsonby - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-11-2000 06:12 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

WOW! This is absolutely beautiful! Well done!

Denise
Dark Angel
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2 posted 04-11-2000 06:49 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WOW, I agree,absolutley beautiful!!!
Excellent!!  

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Beautiful...you got some great words here  
Esmeralda Ponsonby
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4 posted 04-12-2000 05:57 AM       View Profile for Esmeralda Ponsonby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Esmeralda Ponsonby

dsnyder, Dark Angel, hoot_owl_rn,
Thank you all very much I appreciate your reading and enjoying.  
Danny Holloway
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5 posted 04-12-2000 10:37 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Very well written i feel..really liked the rhyme and choice of words.

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Esmeralda Ponsonby
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6 posted 04-12-2000 01:34 PM       View Profile for Esmeralda Ponsonby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Esmeralda Ponsonby

Sir Danny, I thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it.  
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Intriguing words, Esmeralda.  A lovely poem.

Rich
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8 posted 04-12-2000 08:16 PM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

This was very good. You describe a romantic moment exquisitely
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9 posted 04-12-2000 08:31 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

So wonderfully exquisite

Jeffrey
 
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