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Venom

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GlassCandy
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Venom

Silence deafens
Food weakens
Nothing around but the sound
of time
As darkness creeps
Twilite weeps
and misery slithers, crawls
slowly into my closely guarded walls
I begin to wonder
Am I trapped in my mind again?
© Copyright 2000 Elaine De Marzo - All Rights Reserved
INclan
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1 posted 04-11-2000 07:08 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

GlassCandy,

I am surprised that no one has responded to this.  I LIKE it. There is a great deal that could be read into this verse...depression or insanity.  Aren't we all trapped within our own minds? A good first post!  Welcome to Passions.

INclan
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I've wondered that myself before

Welcome to passions  
Poet deVine
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3 posted 04-12-2000 10:13 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Sometimes I do feel like this... thanks for the poem. Welcome to our family! Please check your email for a special welcome.  
Cerenity
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Hi Glass Candy,

This is very good and oh so true, I find that silence does deafen but the sounds that protrude my space is deafening as well.

Very nicely done and welcome to passions,

Cerenity
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Awesome first post,i liked it a lot
Parker
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Yes I must agree, a biting first post it is.

Parker
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7 posted 04-13-2000 03:02 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Welcome to passions
great writing

Jeffrey
 
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