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Love Is A Chance
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Love Is A Chance |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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Love is a chance you must take Sometimes it works out or it could lead to heartbreak Love is a roll of the dice Sometimes it hurts other times it's nice *********************** Next line anyone??? |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Love is a chance I choose NOT to take - for I have grown weary from all the heartache... But who says that "lonesome" is any less painful - I'll just close my eyes now and dream of my angel... He holds me at night and he doesn't ask "why" I'm not able to love him - together - we cry... He whispers to me as he lulls me to sleep - in the arms of my angel I love not - and weep... Sorry to be so BLUE about the whole idea....  |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
That's truly remarkable beautiful illustration of your heart Jeffrey |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Love is a chance, That is worth every risk. To know love completes you, The whom you can't pick. It happens upon you, When you're unaware. It slips up beside you, And not can compare. Embrace it completely, Each time it is near. For knowing true love, Is worth every tear. |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Love is a dance That can take us through life- Swaying this way and that With one so right. Love is a song That knows no end- For it carries on In the hearts of our friends. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Love is the heartsong of one with no doubt. The very best feeling from the inside out. The butterfly on wing that simply settles on the very sweetest of the spring flower petals. Drinking full from the nectar therein, returning again and again and again. Love is a chance that is taken with glee. Love is you, loving me. ~*Marge*~ < !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 04-11-2000).] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thank you all for your replies All would be a fitting completion to this poem, but of all the replies so far I think Marilyn's is the most fitting end to this piece. TY all again Jeffrey |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
hehehe Sorry Jeffrey...Mine didn't go too well with yours. I seem to be the only sourpuss here! LOL Still dusting myself off from the last fallout. Definately not in a hurry to get back into another! I pray one day, someone makes me believe again, in true love. All the times I have believed, have only turned out to be dreams, or stars that I can't catch, ya know? You've helped me out alot with this one, that piece I wrote helped me heal a little on the inside. It's hard to admit when you're down, and have lost hope. Thank you again. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jeffrey, Love is a bond, You must respond. Love is the very goal, The complete of the soul. |
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