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tulip
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0 posted 04-11-2000 01:57 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for tulip

I have a gift, to see right through,
I know at once if you are true,
I know that you just want me too,
But I want you to love me.

I've fallen into your spider web,
I'm trapped and now I feel I'm dead,
I wish to climb inside your head,
I want you to love me.

I haven't had these feelings long,
I have to be the one who's strong,
I know my feelings can't be wrong,
I want you to love me.

Why is it I'm always in second place?
Why can't I ever win the race?
Am I just doomed to have this place,
I want you to love me.

I let you go, it hurts me deep,
I didn't know, there's no relief,
I lost another good nights sleep,
I want you to love me.


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Danny Holloway
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1 posted 04-11-2000 03:13 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Nice poem.  I like the way you used rhyme in this piece.  Flowed well.


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2 posted 04-11-2000 04:19 PM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

Some very heartfelt emotions expressed well. Nice work.
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Thank you...
 
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