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~~True Love ~~ (Acrostic)
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~~True Love ~~ (Acrostic) |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
T~R~U~E L~O~V~E Tenderness that never ends Revealing souls that lie within Unto each a promise made Eyes of love that never fade Love given without reserve Onto an oath to preserve Virtue and trust forever sealed Emotion of heart there revealed ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ < !signature--> A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. [This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 04-11-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great, Danny! A rhyming acrostic! These are very challenging to do and you have done so wonderfully! Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Really like this, Danny .... Beautiful sentiments and excellent writing here ..... |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
This is too cool~ Just last night I had been thinking of doing an acrostic with 'true love'~ You beat me to it!~ How very lovely Danny  Marie~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A wonderful acrostic and definition of true love--great poem! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*SIGH* (smile) your a romantic poet... and now ... we all know it...  very nice danny-boy... it is hard to do these with rhyme and to make them have real emotion as opposed to just words in line formation... you made it look easy sir ... way to go blue eyes LOL on the "BEG" take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
*SIGH* I'll have to agree with JM on this one, you make it look so easy...what an absolutely lovely poem. Short and tenderly sweet.May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
Ahhh.. so beautiful Danny! Great job! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I'm sorry....I just dropped my tissue. ok. ( blowing my nose...I'm better now) This is one of your best. Marina |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Danny-dorable~ T-his is so you ! H-onest and true. E-ver the romantic B-eating heart E-ternally sending S-weet thoughts T-hat are never-ending. L-ilting and lovely O-vertures V-ivid with tune E-mitting verse in perfect swoon. I-n perfect harmony S-ung with melody T-rue R-hapsody sung in U-nison E-vermore with you. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
TRUE LOVE...True poet! wow! Very romantic!!!my favorite "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Forgot to add this in the e-mail... Great minds think alike   |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sounds like a description of the heart that wrote it A beautiful acrostic Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Certainly sounds like love to me Not that I'm an expert or anything...lol |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Danny, This was wonderful, my friend!!! Love every bit of it!!! So tender and true, Danny. You outdid yourself this time!!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Danny* Wow!! This is wonderful...refreshing...amazing, your talent continues to speak to my heart and you words fall like leaves on a blustery fall day, with a rainbow of colors and a mixture of feelings. Thank you for sharing this gift that consumes you. Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
This is most excellent Sir. You mastered it brilliantly. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Danny, you make it sound so easy! True love and all....(sigh) Tell me oh wise one, how does one get over the fear of "being burned"...? I know I've stared true love in the eyes before, but I was so darn scared of "letting go", I turned and ran!  Love to me, is a setup for a MAJOR fall......I see all you people in love, and I wonder, how the hell do they do it? How can they be so lucky to find someone who doesn't hurt them with words...? This lovely piece certainly brings back fond memories...thank you. Darn good job you did here! |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
A note of "Thanks" to all who replied to this poem. I am surprised and pleased that so many responded with such kind words. A word of acknowledgment to Denise (dsnyder) for her helpful comments. Truly a sweet lady. < !signature--> A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. [This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 04-12-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ah, you're welcome Danny, glad to help! Denise |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Danny~ a truely lovely acrostic, I love acrostics they are my favourite Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
rhyming and acrostic...awesome! Not an easy feat. My last acrostic was INTINACY..did you read it a few months ago? I have written less then a half dozen in my life so this APPLAUSE is for you! |
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