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Jeffrey Carter
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0 posted 04-11-2000 02:31 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

someone please help me i just hurt the one i love
a very special angel sent from heaven above
i never meant to take advantage of her loving heart
and it's killing me inside that i'm tearing us apart

looking through this waterfall of tears upon my face
i know that i shall never again feel her soft embrace
i will never again feel her touch i know she is gone
and i am left here in the dark crying all alone

i know it's all my fault i should've been honest from the start
then maybe i wouldn't be lying here with this broken heart
won't someone please tell me that i will be ok?
that i will live to love again that i will find a way

***************************************************

darling if you happen to see this just know that i am truly sorry that i caused you so much pain

i will love you always
Jeffrey

© Copyright 2000 Jeffrey D. Carter - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 04-11-2000 03:05 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

very beautiful and impassioned plea.
very.
your heart wrote this one... that is for sure
keep writing it out...helps work it out...
helps the heart to heal,
take care, jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon


Marge Tindal
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2 posted 04-11-2000 06:12 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Jeffrey~
This is a sincere pouring from
your heart ... I hope she understands
your plea.  When we hurt someone and
it causes us this much pain ...
we know that they are suffering too.
Give yourself some time.
It will heal, but only after you
rid yourself of the guilt you carry.

Peace to you, my friend.
~*Marge*~





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JamesMichael
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3 posted 04-11-2000 07:09 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

You know Jeffrey you made me think about how desperately some of us want someone to love and in our heart we would like to give them the world and then when we finally find ourselves in a loving relationship somehow we fail and we don't live up to our hopes and expectations or theirs....and I don't believe that we destroy a relationship by only one mistake..I think it is an accumulation of mistakes over a long period of time...so it seems to me that you are truly sorry and you have the right attitude and a soft heart...so I hope that she will forgive you and give you another chance...I think we would all like to believe that the one we love would give us another chance..and someday she will probably need another chance from you.   James
Jeffrey Carter
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4 posted 04-11-2000 01:47 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Thank you FRIENDS your kindness is very appreciated. I know your words are true and I will certainly go on with my life with or without my love. Please forgive me for throwing my problems on you.

Jeffrey
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5 posted 04-11-2000 01:53 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very touching poem, Jeffrey. If things don't work out with her, the lessons you have learned will be valuable in the next relationship. We are wise if we learn from our mistakes. Again, great poem!

Denise
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6 posted 04-11-2000 02:11 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

I think my friends before me gave you some good advice .... this piece is heartfelt and sincere ...
Have you shown this to her?



[This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 04-11-2000).]
WhtDove
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7 posted 04-11-2000 02:49 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Ah, never be sorry for putting what you feel in verse. If anything these are the most caring, loving, sharing people to do with it.

It will get better, I hope too that she can forgive you! Written from the heart, and what a heart it is. Did ya try giving this to her?

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8 posted 04-11-2000 03:45 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

This is a beautifully written poem sir...I'm sure your angel will love it.  If she doesn't come back to you with forgiveness, I'd say she's close to crazy!  (just my opinion of course!)     
Marilyn
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9 posted 04-11-2000 04:00 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

I wish I knew how to help you Jeffrey. I do not know the situation therefore can not give decent advice. Trust is a very fragile thing and sometimes not easily healed. The best advice I can give is this, be honest, speak from your heart and always remember you as well as she are human and make mistakes.

Stand strong in yourself and no matter what the outcome is, life does move forward. There are always brighter skies on the horizon.
TerryW
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10 posted 04-11-2000 04:35 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Jeffrey,
     Don't ever think that you are "throwing your problems our way"!  That is what friends are for... for listening and comforting, and for ttaking the time to help you work things out.  Just let us know anytime you need someone to talk to....we will be here for you!

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
Jeffrey Carter
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11 posted 04-12-2000 12:16 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

To all of you again thank you for your kindness. It is rare to find a group of strangers that become instant friends, but that is what I have found in passions.

P.S. She did return . We are going to try to work things out.

Much love to all my new family.
Jeffrey
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12 posted 04-12-2000 02:18 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Jeffrey~ this brought on the tears, then I read she came back!! I'm so glad for you. I hope it all works out! -SEA
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13 posted 04-12-2000 02:40 AM       View Profile for Ella   Email Ella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ella

Jeff,

I have just learnt how to use this poetry page and your poem was the first that i read. It was so beautiful and touching i want to read more of your work and i know that i will. If the lady you were writing to did not see this poem maybe you should show her or tell her how you feel. You express yourself beautifully and eloquently. You made my heart patter.

Ella
Jeffrey Carter
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14 posted 04-12-2000 03:12 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Thank you Ella , she did return
thanks for the kind words

Jeffrey
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15 posted 04-12-2000 10:45 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Jeffery...I'm glad she returned...hopefully you learned that honesty is always the best policy....there are no tracks to cover when you're honest from the start  
 
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