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Your Ride

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NamelessOne
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since 04-09-2000
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Biloxi MS


0 posted 04-11-2000 02:19 AM       View Profile for NamelessOne   Email NamelessOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for NamelessOne


Your Ride


Up in the front car
Hands held high
Clank, Clank, Clank
Nothing but Blue sky
Pulse slamming
Breath quick
Surrounded by life like a lovers embrace
Your Life`s your ride
But who`s on the switch
Just make it amazing
Experience rich
Hit me with it,Hit me hard
Slam the complacency
Burn it charred

Fears to Fear are missed chances
Unwritten poetry
Undanced dances
Screams of the dying are things unsaid
Affairs of the Heart not of the head
So take a hard look
And don`t miss a chance
Because the music might stop
Before you dance that dance


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WhiteNite
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since 04-09-2000
Posts 249
Montgomery, AL


1 posted 04-11-2000 04:20 AM       View Profile for WhiteNite   Email WhiteNite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhiteNite's Home Page   View IP for WhiteNite

Tell me about it...

I once wrote a poem along the same lines called "taking chances"... you have to take them when they come or live with the regret that your chances are gone.

Great poem.

 "The storm rises up when the shadows descend
every beat of my heart every day without end
I will stand like a rock I will bend till I break
till theres no more to give if thats what it takes
I will risk everything I will fight I will bleed
I will lay down my life if thats what you need
every second I live thats the promise I make"

I have no idea who wrote this... tell me if you know. =)
Severn
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2 posted 04-11-2000 07:35 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Love the style of this - fast and succinct - good stuff!


NamelessOne
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since 04-09-2000
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Biloxi MS


3 posted 04-11-2000 08:31 AM       View Profile for NamelessOne   Email NamelessOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NamelessOne

Yes ! Whitenite and is there anything worse than regret,thanks for the comments

Severn,thank you for giving it a read
 
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