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Flutter My Heart

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mariee66
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Feel the pounding within my breast
Fluttering heart-
Beating faster as I catch glimpse of him.
Thunder racing through my veins...
Pound hard--pound loud
Hear my love...
If only he could hear my love.
Hold fast dear heart
Your pounding dilutes my mind...
Clouds my vision.
Let me look upon his face-
Handsome face from afar.
OH!  Pound again dear heart!
For now I know-
I glimpse true love...
Pound on--Pound on.

© Copyright 2000 Marie E. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-11-2000 01:14 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Hot-Hot!

Got my blood a-boiling!
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Strong poem ,had a nice beat to it,yuck yuck
seriously though i enjoyed it, Thanks
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Mariee~
Enjoyed.
Like the reference of
'Thunder racing through my veins'
~*Marge*~



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mariee66
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THANKS ALL!
MARIE
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Like the beat  
mariee66
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Flutter and pound  ~
Thanks Hoot!
Marie~
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