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Open Poetry #6

Flutter My Heart

mariee66
Senior Member

since 2000-01-30

Posts 596
Recess, OfYourMind

0 posted 2000-04-11 01:12 AM

Feel the pounding within my breast
Fluttering heart-
Beating faster as I catch glimpse of him.
Thunder racing through my veins...
Pound hard--pound loud
Hear my love...
If only he could hear my love.
Hold fast dear heart
Your pounding dilutes my mind...
Clouds my vision.
Let me look upon his face-
Handsome face from afar.
OH! Pound again dear heart!
For now I know-
I glimpse true love...
Pound on--Pound on.

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

1 posted 2000-04-11 01:14 AM

Hot-Hot!

Got my blood a-boiling!

NamelessOne
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 197
Biloxi MS

2 posted 2000-04-11 01:32 AM

Strong poem ,had a nice beat to it,yuck yuck
seriously though i enjoyed it, Thanks

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-04-11 06:43 AM

Mariee~
Enjoyed.
Like the reference of
'Thunder racing through my veins'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

mariee66
Senior Member

since 2000-01-30

Posts 596
Recess, OfYourMind

4 posted 2000-04-11 10:27 AM

THANKS ALL!
MARIE

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 2000-04-11 10:36 AM

Like the beat

mariee66
Senior Member

since 2000-01-30

Posts 596
Recess, OfYourMind

6 posted 2000-04-11 01:45 PM

Flutter and pound

~
Thanks Hoot!
Marie~

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