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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-04-11 12:22 PM


some things never stop motioning
a cancer to illuminate
all things..chained to hate
nothing changes..just the lack of reasons
i fear therefore.. i endure
forcing my answers
to have honest emotion
then perhaps..ill matter once more

© Copyright 2000 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-04-11 01:24 AM


hey jac,
very cool poem...you always say it so well, with a few deep and perfect thoughts.
very good work as always,
take care, jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon



Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-04-11 08:30 PM


Perhaps....we've all felt this.....good one..  
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