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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Incredible Critters What bright eyes have these, like round black marbles, these tiny furry puffs with legs all splayed and kicking, and mouths that stretch from ear to ear in toothless suckle. They cry in sound that crosses a cricket with a kitten wild and untamed yet plaintive and complaining like hunger. Mother earth, where such amazing things are born and clamor for life across endless cruel time, who will feed all the infants that crawl from dark places into the light with empty bellies and no mother? There are many caring hearts I know with pleasure, rescuers of lost and needy little things, with tiny bottles they wake at night at each small sound and give the gift of life. Incredible critters these tiny hand-sized raccoons, and lucky, even humans are not always so blessed. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Awwwwwwwwww ! How sweet. Oh ... sounds like some of those little critters I'm always rescuing. Everybody knows ... if it needs to be fed at 2-4-6 & 8 ... give it to Marge. We all should remember to take care of these precious little creatures of God. And if you can't do it yourself ... then donate to those centers that do. We are the life line to so many little critters of nature. Thank you, my caring friend, for this. I just got two new LoveBirds today that someone brought to work cause no one wanted them. So .... 2-4-6-8 ! Bleary-eyed I gladly am !  Love you, girlfriend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
How sweet! Very descriptive....I'll take one!  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so sweet Martie! I'm sure they are in good hands with you! Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Smiling here... got a little Ellie Mae in ya? wonderful poem my friend. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Martie, You have natures heart. We should all do our part to help the little critters, when we have encroched on their habitats. Thank you for sharing this. Parker |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
How sweet |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
ROFL cause I saw the title and thought you were going to write something about "men".....LOL  I don't know - I've had too much caffeine or something today, forgive me, for this was sweet! No poem about men could ever be so sweet! LOL Loved this! hehehe  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Good words from a good person, enjoyed the poem. *L* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thank you all for your kind words about this poem. |
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