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Aria
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0 posted 2000-04-10 06:50 PM



Long Gone


To where have they gone,
The many who might have been wrong,
Maybe treated like a pawn,
To where have they gone?

Where might they go,
Where the rivers still flow,
And no one will know,
Where might they go?

How can they survive,
Into trouble they have dived,
For what can they strive,
How can they survive?

Never again will I see my friends,
Too many times the road bends,
What can I do to make amends,
Never again will I see my friends?

By: ArĂ­a

© Copyright 2000 Charles Stafford - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2000-04-10 06:52 PM


yipe where did they go where did you go..nice flow to that their poem welcome to passions!!!

 All Day I Dream About Stanzas!!

Jeffrey Carter
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2 posted 2000-04-10 06:57 PM


Welcome to passions Aria.
You're gonna love it here.

Jeffrey

Poet deVine
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3 posted 2000-04-10 07:58 PM


Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special welcome. I look forward to reading more from you. This poem is so sad and haunting....  
weaubleau
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4 posted 2000-04-10 08:06 PM


good first post...

this place is wonderful.  i've been here only a short time, but i love it and i'm sure you'll love it too.

welcome.


Flidais
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5 posted 2000-04-10 08:14 PM


Very well written.  I don't understand it, but it sounded good.  Welcome!!
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2000-04-10 08:27 PM


Aria~
Welcome to Passion's.

Nice entry and you'll enjoy it here.
If you've got Cerenity for a friend ...
you've got a treasure for sure !
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Cerenity
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7 posted 2000-04-10 09:47 PM


Hi Aria,

This made me so happy to see  your name and your poem here at passions, you are as much my child as the rest in this house and I am so proud of you. There are no words to discrib how wonderful this place called passions is, but I know you will soon experience it for your self like I did.

Welcome to passions and I know I will see more of your work.

Love you much,   Cerenity

Butterflies_dont_cry
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8 posted 2000-04-10 10:27 PM


Welcome To Passions!!

This is a great entrance...and yes were do they go....and do they think of you as much as you think of them....Thank you for sharing this with us  


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.


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