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NamelessOne
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0 posted 04-10-2000 06:11 PM       View Profile for NamelessOne   Email NamelessOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for NamelessOne



take the step into the void
and test your wings so new
it`s been inevitable for so long
so take a ride on what is true
you want to change
so shed your skin
the beauty is there
it lies within
so take the step and you might be surprised
how far you go
how high you fly
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passing shadows
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1 posted 04-10-2000 06:15 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

very uplifting...makes me wanna fly!
Corazon
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2 posted 04-10-2000 06:24 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

whew, me too, seems I have written a few of these but still wear concrete boots...here's to someday, here's to tomorrow!
EagleOne
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3 posted 04-10-2000 06:35 PM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

This reminds me very much of a friend, but I know when the time is right she will certainly fly. This is great, thanks!

 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 04-10-2000 07:06 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Wonderful little poem!. Love it
Liz
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5 posted 04-10-2000 09:27 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Good one..though some people may need a push to take that step!!  
Tara Simms
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I love the positive message in this one!  

 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley


NamelessOne
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7 posted 04-11-2000 02:40 AM       View Profile for NamelessOne   Email NamelessOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NamelessOne

Thank you all for your kind words
 
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